Chaos

As chaos continues to roar Conflicts brew, people try to see Ways to feel some security Amidst things you can not ignore Some prepare to create a plan In these uncertain times today Thoughts of survival come their way. To stay safe however you can New things to face, new things to learn From what led us to all of this It is important not to miss The facts that brought us to concern As the world roars, while change persists Hold each peaceful moment close by From this creation, ground to sky Spread love, where there are angry fists Heidi Sands 2/13/23

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Paige Hind

Date: 2/15/2023 2:07:00 PM

A lot of truth presented in this! Made me think!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/15/2023 3:55:00 PM

Nice to hear. Thank you Paige :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/14/2023 3:04:00 AM

Love the ending, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/14/2023 5:38:00 AM

Thank you Jo :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/13/2023 6:32:00 PM

Always one rotten apple in the barrel. Heidi.. Harry.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Harry :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/13/2023 2:43:00 PM

Lets help spread the love wherever we can, my dear Heidi, today we need it more then ever.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 3:36:00 PM

Yes. True. Thank you Mystic Rose :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/13/2023 11:07:00 AM

This is a call to "arms," so to speak, to raise the banner of love in the battle against chaos. "Ways to feel some security amidst things you can not ignore." A very profound statement Heidi. Your flowing rhythm underscores your theme of love in chaos, underpinning all of our actions. Blessings to you!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 11:10:00 AM

Thank you very much Sam. Blessings :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2023 10:51:00 AM

- I wish those who create chaos in the world would read this poem morning, noon and night ... every day, Heidi - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine. Hugs :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/13/2023 10:21:00 AM

This should be widely promoted for its urgent call control the chaos. The last line is my fave!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Swetha :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/13/2023 8:46:00 AM

Terrifically said! Great advice! Thank you, Heidi! Be assured all, survival is already Guaranteed by our Father in heaven. Fists are not needed...love is the greatest weapon as well as healer. Blessings!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Joe. Blessings :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/13/2023 8:29:00 AM

Saintly sentiments, my friend. Much peace your poem conveys in the face of chaos. Superb ending line, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 8:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay :)

Peter Rees

Date: 2/13/2023 8:16:00 AM

Yes, Heidi, creeping chaos everywhere in the world. Must we just accept the old order has gone and there are new rules now, seemingly not based on any sort of order? Chaos indeed. I love your rhyming lines and your positive note about spreading love. I hope someone’s listening. Well said.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2023 8:43:00 AM

Hi Peter. I don't think we should sit back and accept anything wrong in this transition. I appreciate your feedback. Thank you ! :)