Changing Views

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Changing Views

The coffee in my cup is bitter, 
like the bad taste in my mouth. 
I have been up too long, 
to take back the night,
as the morning has come, 
and it is bright, 
beyond my dreams. 

I have searched for the right words, 
but they were hidden, 
among the empty lines, 
on the paper that has no limits, 
except those, I placed upon it. 

The pen is out of ink, 
the pencil is broken in half. 
The eraser has seen more action, 
then the top ten cars at the raceway. 
I choose to lose what I have not gained. 
In the very submission of my sadness, 
I have grown inside to see a new window 
into my own soul. 


The bright light of the sun, 
renews my efforts, 
to paint wind onto glass. 
I will capture what is before me, 
in humble thankfulness, 
gratitude for another chance, 
to succeed, 
and not fail. 

God Bless the new day, 
in every way. 
Beginning with all, 
that I know...
to be renewed, 
by all that I never knew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/17/2020 2:58:00 PM
Thanks for the journey into your thoughts throughout the night and the morning after. Enjoyed, Ann! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 2/17/2020 2:18:00 PM
Lovely, well crafted lines. Thanks Ann.
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Date: 2/17/2020 11:54:00 AM
Introspective and complex, Ann, so true about finding renewal in another try-
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