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Pushing through the dark earth With frail tendrils of emerald Olive and jade I feel the trinkle of raindrops Caressing me into Spring Pressing onward, I feel the sun A brilliant embrace stirring My petals to open wide Show the world what resides Inside – as Summer sings Penetrating my stems with A chilly melancholy frost My beauty has gone missing With the dying of warmth Leaving behind Autumn’s laughter Parched and frozen in death My dreams are spent As I welcome the blankets Of serene white Across my grave lies Winter If I Were A ? Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose January 23, 2021 2) if I were a flower

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Date: 2/5/2021 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. What pretty butterflies. A wonderful way to tell the story of flowers. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...........
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Date: 2/4/2021 1:01:00 PM
Across the grave may lay winter but you make me eager for spring with this beauty, thank you for joining. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/23/2021 8:54:00 AM
Great personification. Flowers are so beautiful and when they die they leave seeds to grow again. ~~
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Date: 1/23/2021 6:25:00 AM
I see the beauty and hear the rhythm in your free verse poem, Gina. As pretty as flowers!
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Date: 1/23/2021 4:36:00 AM
A sentimental write, touching, beautifully crafted yet has a sadness in it. Awesome write my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/23/2021 3:47:00 AM
This personification poem is so delicately, romantically and gorgeously done Regina. Wow!
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