Challenges

There will always be challenges in our lives We can make it when we approach it, day by day Positive changes can come to those who strive There will be times when it seems there is no way So we let ourselves feel and we take a break We can make it when we approach it, day by day There will be times when the rain falls, a lot is at stake The sun will always shine again, bright and clear So, we let ourselves feel and we take a break There will be times that we may have fear We can reach to find the courage within The sun will always shine again bright and clear There will be these times, but faith will win Keep moving forward, moment to moment We can reach to find the courage within Just try to write and speak in the time spent There will always be challenges in our lives Keep moving forward, moment to moment Positive changes can come to those who strive Heidi Sands 8/11/17 *Placed in a 1st place for the Terzanelle Time Contest.

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Joseph May

Date: 12/10/2017 5:42:00 AM

I like the positive message of this beautiful Terzanelle Heidi...Thank you and congrats on your win

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 6:01:00 AM

Thank you for the opportunity to enter one of my Terzanelle. I appreciate the placement :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2017 9:08:00 PM

Congrats Heidi..well deserved first place.. I am happy to see you get this recognition!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 6:00:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay for all your support :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/9/2017 7:07:00 PM

, Heidi, well done, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2017 7:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/12/2017 10:11:00 AM

I agree w/Ravi ... an excellent Terzanelle, Heidi. Depth of expression explored w/keen insight. Wonderful poem. Love and peace.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 10:23:00 AM

Thank you Freddie. I appreciate your positive feedback :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/12/2017 5:46:00 AM

Excellent. Very deep write. Enjoyed reading it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 6:58:00 AM

Thank you, Ravi :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2017 1:54:00 AM

Having faith is the answer Heidi. A great message! : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 6:57:00 AM

Thank you, Connie :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/11/2017 9:05:00 PM

Yes, there will, but you'll get through it. Well done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 6:57:00 AM

Yes, thank you M.L.

Joseph May

Date: 8/11/2017 7:57:00 PM

We must never give up hope, Well expressed Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/12/2017 6:57:00 AM

That is right Joseph. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/11/2017 5:41:00 PM

You are doing extremely well at these Terzanelles! I am very impressed with your wonderful skill and improvement since your first one! You have amazed by your incredible words of caring that this poem exudes! What a delight this one was to read this evening! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/11/2017 5:44:00 PM

Thank you very much for all your support Russell. I am happy you like these :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/11/2017 4:28:00 PM

Good flow to this poem--well written piece! Good message as well, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/11/2017 4:29:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! I appreciate your feedback. These Terzanelle are pretty fun :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/11/2017 2:28:00 PM

Love, the message, Heidi, This was great! Interesting form.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/11/2017 2:44:00 PM

Hi Mike. Thank you very much :) Yes, this form I recently learned is interesting and has been a fun one to work with. :)