Cerulean Tears


On such a cloudless day
with only clear blue skies
Why is there so much rain
falling from my eyes
I got bluebird colored tears
warbling in my heart
The saddest song to my ears,
when you said we should part

Cerulean tears
to water my
Herculean fears

Will the pain grow
stronger and stronger
over the years

I'm just a blue-collar guy,
never much given to cry
But when you pinned that
blue ribbon on my heart,
losing your love won me
the saddest ever goodbye

Cerulean tears
bluing up my soul
Big blue-hearted pain
ain't how love goes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/15/2016 8:12:00 AM
The pain of lost love you wrote about is the bluest of all. Well done, Freddie.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/20/2016 7:27:00 PM
Ty Lin. Love the love and support. Much appreciated. Always with love.
Date: 10/15/2016 5:53:00 AM
I feel 'blue' reading your sad poem Freddie love the title :-) I've only discovered the word cerulean since I started writing and joined the site:-) hugs Jan xx
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/20/2016 7:28:00 PM
Me too. Ha ha ha. But ty for the gracious words, Jan. Many blessings and love to you.
Date: 10/14/2016 9:10:00 PM
That was very sad RW... Now I have to look up the word Cerulean!!!Haha... You are a great poet.../|\
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/14/2016 9:37:00 PM
Another word for blue, bro. I got the blue(s) theme laced throughout the poem. This poem is for anyone who has loved and lost. We know that bummed feeling. Ty for chiming in, Rick. Love you as always, my man.
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