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Certain Things I Like About You

Certain things about you, u don’t know Want to tell you, with all my love Things make me happy, while u do it with all your heart Don’t worry about me, I always smile When I am with you, I always shine I want to appreciate, all your efforts And things I do love, about you All you keep patience, when I behave according to mood You always ask me, even I do not talk to you Hey listen, I am sorry about my mistakes You always stand, by my side And, take all the blames Even if you, are not in a good mood You ask me, hey are you alright And I always melt, like an ice-cream This makes me fall in love, with you More and more, you take care of me You do so much, just not for me But for everyone, close to you You are an amazing, people are jealous of you They might hurt you, but you never hurt them back People may, don’t know that But I know, you have that soft heart All you do, is love to me Which makes me grow, back to heal Will not say, you are so perfect But, you are that boy Who every, girl needs Ravneet Kaur

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Date: 10/4/2023 7:20:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Ravneet Kaur
Date: 10/8/2023 10:45:00 PM
Thanku, much appreciate for your supportive comment
Date: 10/2/2023 10:00:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to a caring and loving partner
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Ravneet Kaur
Date: 10/8/2023 10:47:00 PM
Thanku

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