Centrality

I see you You're in there Realise Take a step back Honour yourself Standing your ground Is not selfish See glimmers of hope Find strength from somewhere Acceptance is key If I change nothing Then nothing will change

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/27/2023 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A great write with a great ending. Enjoy your win...............

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/28/2023 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Paula x

Joseph May

Date: 12/27/2023 2:59:00 AM

Very nicely done, Congrats on your win

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/28/2023 11:07:00 AM

Many thanks Joseph, thank you for setting the interesting challenge

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/23/2023 4:16:00 PM

wise and well written words, Di11y! Acceptance is the key...so true...as is "if I change nothing, then nothing will change.' Powerful words. Have a great evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/24/2023 1:29:00 AM

Thank you Sara, it often feels like watching and waiting makes the most sense but eventually you realise the years roll by x

Silent One

Date: 12/23/2023 3:35:00 AM

Very true... the ending is spot on.. this cold be a life mantra..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/23/2023 3:48:00 AM

Haha maybe I saw it once on a t shirt :) thanks for your kind words