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Cemetery Ritual

On an eerie and foggy Halloween night A couple enters a dark graveyard with fear Hearing noises of a ritual tonight Knowing that demons and skeletons are near A sacrifice of a virgin is their goal The demons hearts are really black as coal Raising the fierce zombies up, they do attack The couple turns and runs never to look back
Russell Sivey, Form: Rispetto
The eerie fog is even denser now; Our couple wander, praying to get home, But find themselves inside a wizard’s lair; He’s chanting from a heavy, dusty tome. He raises rotting corpses, smelling foul; They grab the couple, bite and tear to kill; Our heroes die, then hear the wizard‘s voice, And rise to serve him too, against their will.
Jack Horne, Form: Rhyming verse Contest: New Contest Team Work Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 9/1/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/3/2013 1:51:00 PM
Way to go with winning team work..Congrats..Sara
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 10/6/2013 11:22:00 PM
wwhat a blast! Congrats on this win Morgan sorry but having problem with my opera browser to post
Date: 10/3/2013 11:06:00 AM
nice team work..... lovely win............SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:12:00 PM
Scarey Piece! Congratulations to you both.
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Date: 10/1/2013 3:39:00 PM
congrats on 3rd in team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile (both were 3rd)
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:29:00 PM
thanks for working on this one with me : )
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Date: 9/4/2013 4:25:00 PM
Hi Russell; This great. I lov the way you put it together - just perfect. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. I'm back..... Lucilla
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Date: 9/2/2013 3:35:00 PM
Oh yuck....just perfect for Halloween!!!!!!! Awesome you two....great job...glad this wasn't in color!!!!
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Date: 9/2/2013 12:20:00 PM
a formidable display of mystery well rendered by a tandem, russell... bewitched, beguiled, besieged!...here's to another ravishing halloween!.. grreat stuff!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/2/2013 11:23:00 AM
Interesting read... Great team work!
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Date: 9/2/2013 3:47:00 AM
Eerie but so poetically expressed! Excellent work my friend! Thanking you for visiting!
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Date: 9/1/2013 10:08:00 PM
Very Nice!!! The ghouls are restless...
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Date: 9/1/2013 9:48:00 PM
Nice team work on cemetery ritual
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