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Celestial Spheres

it tumbles in each chamber of my heart
thundering turbulence 
raging against the walls
rising rising
like the tide awakened
by the insistent moon
this clamorous desire
floods my heart
rushing through my veins 
gushing and swelling my very core
throbbing its demands
it commands 
the inner pink mooned sphere
to awake and release 
the inner tides

and I am swept away
on ebullient crest
of this passion display
far far away
to where
life is a pulse
thought is a sigh
and time?
time is endless
in the celestial spheres
of your eyes


Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/6/2016 8:14:00 AM For me I can't understand why people have issue with pictures. I say do what feels right! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/6/2016 9:07:00 PM :) I say what you say....That's why I blogged. Hugs, Rick.

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/6/2016 1:08:00 AM ... didn't see that end coming. Some eyes are really quite something ... but a moon that tugs at your inner being like the tide of the oceans? ... well that's just a little bit of an other-worldy beauty. Adore the way your thoughts built up and climaxed to the final reveal. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/6/2016 7:41:00 AM Thanks, Timoth. I'm glad you liked this piece. Loved the last sentence of your post. Thank you, dear. Hugs

Richard D Seal Date: 3/5/2016 7:46:00 PM If looking in my eyes has this affect on you my little Desert Orchid then stare as much as you like lol. The gates to the soul, what lays there behind ??? you're getting good at this free verse. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/6/2016 7:43:00 AM ;).....naughty as ever, Mr Seal. You are a tease. Thanks for your compliment. You've neglected Desert Orchid something awful...bad boy.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/5/2016 6:45:00 PM I am always amazed how you find such amazing photos to compliment your artistry. A 7 for both! Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/6/2016 7:44:00 AM Half the fun for me....if finding just the right pic. Thanks for this reassurance. You know the commotion there was about this very issue.

Jayne Eggins Date: 3/5/2016 12:21:00 PM My favourite thing to write about and you've captured my imagination, I think you may have inspired a poem !!! Beautifully done .. my highest compliment is a. Sigh. Love Jayne x Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/5/2016 12:23:00 PM Thank you, Dear. My favorite topic as well. I have many sensual writes....What is life without passion. I'm grateful for the visit. :) Hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 3/4/2016 4:06:00 PM i like the confident opening of this poem, trusting that the reader will know exactly what you're talking about, nice bits of rhyme sprinkled throughout, and i particularly like "life is a pulse/thought is a sigh" hugs, charlotte Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/5/2016 12:25:00 PM Thank you, dear. I love it when you give me insights. I'm grateful for the visit. I know I write free verse and then get tempted to sprinkle rhyme in there...as you said. I should stick to one or the other. Hugs...

Daniel Turner Date: 3/4/2016 2:35:00 PM Very romantic and very well written. Simply beautiful! Peace my dear:) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/5/2016 12:25:00 PM Thank you, Daniel. I'm touched that you would visit this piece.

Tim Smith Date: 3/4/2016 1:37:00 PM Wow Eileen this is great. It moves along at a powerful pace and I didn't want it to end. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/4/2016 2:09:00 PM That's a wonderful post, Tim. Thanks ever so much. To want a poem to go on....is a great compliment.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/4/2016 1:27:00 PM - A poem like this, do not need so many words ....... I give you a sigh, because it is so beautiful - A happy weekend to you my friend Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 3/4/2016 2:09:00 PM Thank you, Sunshine. You always bring me warmth with you sweet visits. God bless you.....Hugs