Eileen Manassian Poet Free verse

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Celestial Spheres

it tumbles in each chamber of my heart
thundering turbulence 
raging against the walls
rising rising
like the tide awakened
by the insistent moon
this clamorous desire
floods my heart
rushing through my veins 
gushing and swelling my very core
throbbing its demands
it commands 
the inner pink mooned sphere
to awake and release 
the inner tides

and I am swept away
on ebullient crest
of this passion display
far far away
to where
life is a pulse
thought is a sigh
and time?
time is endless
in the celestial spheres
of your eyes


Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2016 at 8:14 AM For me I can't understand why people have issue with pictures. I say do what feels right! Eileen Manassian March 6, 2016 at 9:07 PM :) I say what you say....That's why I blogged. Hugs, Rick.

Timothy Hicks March 6, 2016 at 1:08 AM ... didn't see that end coming. Some eyes are really quite something ... but a moon that tugs at your inner being like the tide of the oceans? ... well that's just a little bit of an other-worldy beauty. Adore the way your thoughts built up and climaxed to the final reveal. Eileen Manassian March 6, 2016 at 7:41 AM Thanks, Timoth. I'm glad you liked this piece. Loved the last sentence of your post. Thank you, dear. Hugs

Richard D Seal March 5, 2016 at 7:46 PM If looking in my eyes has this affect on you my little Desert Orchid then stare as much as you like lol. The gates to the soul, what lays there behind ??? you're getting good at this free verse. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian March 6, 2016 at 7:43 AM ;).....naughty as ever, Mr Seal. You are a tease. Thanks for your compliment. You've neglected Desert Orchid something awful...bad boy.

Richard Lamoureux March 5, 2016 at 6:45 PM I am always amazed how you find such amazing photos to compliment your artistry. A 7 for both! Hugs Rick. Eileen Manassian March 6, 2016 at 7:44 AM Half the fun for me....if finding just the right pic. Thanks for this reassurance. You know the commotion there was about this very issue.

Jayne Eggins March 5, 2016 at 12:21 PM My favourite thing to write about and you've captured my imagination, I think you may have inspired a poem !!! Beautifully done .. my highest compliment is a. Sigh. Love Jayne x Eileen Manassian March 5, 2016 at 12:23 PM Thank you, Dear. My favorite topic as well. I have many sensual writes....What is life without passion. I'm grateful for the visit. :) Hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot March 4, 2016 at 4:06 PM i like the confident opening of this poem, trusting that the reader will know exactly what you're talking about, nice bits of rhyme sprinkled throughout, and i particularly like "life is a pulse/thought is a sigh" hugs, charlotte Eileen Manassian March 5, 2016 at 12:25 PM Thank you, dear. I love it when you give me insights. I'm grateful for the visit. I know I write free verse and then get tempted to sprinkle rhyme in there...as you said. I should stick to one or the other. Hugs...

Daniel Turner March 4, 2016 at 2:35 PM Very romantic and very well written. Simply beautiful! Peace my dear:) Eileen Manassian March 5, 2016 at 12:25 PM Thank you, Daniel. I'm touched that you would visit this piece.

Tim Smith March 4, 2016 at 1:37 PM Wow Eileen this is great. It moves along at a powerful pace and I didn't want it to end. Eileen Manassian March 4, 2016 at 2:09 PM That's a wonderful post, Tim. Thanks ever so much. To want a poem to go on....is a great compliment.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2016 at 1:27 PM - A poem like this, do not need so many words ....... I give you a sigh, because it is so beautiful - A happy weekend to you my friend Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian March 4, 2016 at 2:09 PM Thank you, Sunshine. You always bring me warmth with you sweet visits. God bless you.....Hugs