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it tumbles in each chamber of my heart thundering turbulence raging against the walls rising rising like the tide awakened by the insistent moon this clamorous desire floods my heart rushing through my veins gushing and swelling my very core throbbing its demands it commands the inner pink mooned sphere to awake and release the inner tides and I am swept away on ebullient crest of this passion display far far away to where life is a pulse thought is a sigh and time? time is endless in the celestial spheres of your eyes Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2016 8:14:00 AM

For me I can't understand why people have issue with pictures. I say do what feels right!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/6/2016 9:07:00 PM

:) I say what you say....That's why I blogged. Hugs, Rick.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/6/2016 1:08:00 AM

... didn't see that end coming. Some eyes are really quite something ... but a moon that tugs at your inner being like the tide of the oceans? ... well that's just a little bit of an other-worldy beauty. Adore the way your thoughts built up and climaxed to the final reveal.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/6/2016 7:41:00 AM

Thanks, Timoth. I'm glad you liked this piece. Loved the last sentence of your post. Thank you, dear. Hugs

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/5/2016 7:46:00 PM

If looking in my eyes has this affect on you my little Desert Orchid then stare as much as you like lol. The gates to the soul, what lays there behind ??? you're getting good at this free verse. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/6/2016 7:43:00 AM

;).....naughty as ever, Mr Seal. You are a tease. Thanks for your compliment. You've neglected Desert Orchid something awful...bad boy.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/5/2016 6:45:00 PM

I am always amazed how you find such amazing photos to compliment your artistry. A 7 for both! Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/6/2016 7:44:00 AM

Half the fun for me....if finding just the right pic. Thanks for this reassurance. You know the commotion there was about this very issue.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 3/5/2016 12:21:00 PM

My favourite thing to write about and you've captured my imagination, I think you may have inspired a poem !!! Beautifully done .. my highest compliment is a. Sigh. Love Jayne x

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, Dear. My favorite topic as well. I have many sensual writes....What is life without passion. I'm grateful for the visit. :) Hugs

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/4/2016 4:06:00 PM

i like the confident opening of this poem, trusting that the reader will know exactly what you're talking about, nice bits of rhyme sprinkled throughout, and i particularly like "life is a pulse/thought is a sigh" hugs, charlotte

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 12:25:00 PM

Thank you, dear. I love it when you give me insights. I'm grateful for the visit. I know I write free verse and then get tempted to sprinkle rhyme in there...as you said. I should stick to one or the other. Hugs...

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/4/2016 2:35:00 PM

Very romantic and very well written. Simply beautiful! Peace my dear:)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/5/2016 12:25:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel. I'm touched that you would visit this piece.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/4/2016 1:37:00 PM

Wow Eileen this is great. It moves along at a powerful pace and I didn't want it to end.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/4/2016 2:09:00 PM

That's a wonderful post, Tim. Thanks ever so much. To want a poem to go on....is a great compliment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2016 1:27:00 PM

- A poem like this, do not need so many words ....... I give you a sigh, because it is so beautiful - A happy weekend to you my friend Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/4/2016 2:09:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. You always bring me warmth with you sweet visits. God bless you.....Hugs