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Celestial Ride

Let's go for a celestial ride A heavenly trip where stars abide We'll pass the moon in its full phase and gaze at Venus and its glowing ways Look out for Mars as it burns red A month is named after it, it is said There goes Jupiter and its many moons In myth, its the brother of Pluto and Neptune There's Saturn and all its rings Listen closely, you'll hear them sing No other life forms on these planets dwell So it's back to Earth, we know it well

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Date: 1/7/2024 12:32:00 PM
Loved this ride and the melodic rhyme! Great job!
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Date: 1/5/2024 12:26:00 PM
You take the reader on a cosmic celestial ride.. nicely done..
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Date: 1/5/2024 10:45:00 AM
Enchanting moments on this heavenly journey you've whisked us away on. Joseph, I truly liked the cosmic journey- A fave.
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Date: 1/5/2024 6:43:00 AM
Much enjoyed the celestial journey, Joseph--lovely poem.
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:01:00 AM
Imagination is something to behold, the eyes they allow magic to unfold, on Earth humanity's hold--eons old. This is great stuff Joseph. Cheers. anselmo
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Date: 1/4/2024 7:26:00 PM
On this celestial ride you've taken us on, moments truly are magical. There's something about stars, the moon and planets that I find so fascinating. So wonderful indeed, being here on Earth. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/4/2024 5:17:00 PM
simply beautiful write Joe I loved the journey you took us on fav'ing this hugs Shadow
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Date: 1/4/2024 4:26:00 PM
I appreciate tagging along on your beautiful, celestial ride. I appreciate the god/goddess references...added some depth to your easy flowing poem. Loved it. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 1/4/2024 3:33:00 PM
a celestial journey indeed Joseph:-) Happy New Year:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2024 2:19:00 PM
Thanks for the ride Joseph. Well done :)
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Date: 1/4/2024 12:29:00 PM
So true. Earth is best. I enjoyed this celestial ride.
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