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Celestial Reflections-Hiku

sunlight sauntered through the dark edge of dawn ~ amber horizon brilliant diamonds stippled upon black velvet ~ glittering stars silver ornament hung in ebon skies ~ moonlight through the mist November 22, 2021 Hiku (Disciplined Brevity) Contest by William Kekaula syllable count checked with HMS and listed respectively: 5-5-5 4-7-4 5-5-5

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/2/2021 4:02:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Line! Second verse my favorite. Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/2/2021 4:51:00 AM

Thanks for letting me know which you prefer, Kim.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/2/2021 1:54:00 AM

Hi Lin, it's a pleasure to cross paths with you again! This set of Hiku is delightful and colourful. Congratulations on a truly merited win. ~ Best regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 12/2/2021 4:50:00 AM

aww thanks, Paul. Nice to be back and to hear from you.

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/1/2021 7:38:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/2/2021 4:50:00 AM

Thank you, Beata.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/1/2021 5:14:00 PM

Dear Lin, your splendid artistry reflects your appreciation for celestial beauty. I enjoyed the unique mood of each Hiku. Congratulations for your excellent win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Lin Lane
Date: 12/2/2021 4:50:00 AM

I wanted each Hiku to describe a part of a day. Thanks, Susan.