Celestial Home

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" CELESTIAL HOME " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Exiled My soul is From its celestial home, Assigned by the will of my Lord To roam among a world of shadows, In search of fleeting experiences that only the Temporal could provide! Alas The years that my soul has passed on earth Makes its yearning of return to growing by the day For Cannot stand anymore the many ills that make Humanity so much to suffer! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 August 2018

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Charlie Smith

Date: 8/24/2018 9:22:00 AM

With the wonders of your garden, I believe you've gone beyond most of those ills Demetrios. I see beauty and Love...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2018 9:57:00 AM

I might "have gone beyond most of those ills " my dear friend, Charlie but still humanity lingers within those ills! Thank you so much! God bless you!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/24/2018 7:18:00 AM

Lifted and saddened reading this. Love and tears dear poet <3 xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2018 7:54:00 AM

Maureen my sweet dear friend, thank you for your sentimental visit and comment! Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/24/2018 7:10:00 AM

Very elegant and precious words my friend, Demetrios..your poem makes me think and ponder..well done!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2018 7:53:00 AM

How wonderful your comment my friend, Vijay! Thank you for your delightful visit!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/24/2018 6:47:00 AM

A roaming insightful soul who has seen the world and experienced its beauties and cruelties.. now full to the brim longing for a "celestial home" to get healed and be granted God's divine bliss and grace.. A gripping write.. a profound spiritual free verse! Enjoyed reading. A FAV. Thank you so much for sharing dear Demetrios. Be blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/24/2018 7:53:00 AM

Another of your fabulous and insightful comments that elevates the humble poem of mine! Thank you so much dearest, Besma! Be blessed my friend!