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Celebrations, Minichu, Festival of Lights

When lanterns paint the sky,
I'll weave tulsi trinkets, celebrate divine sight~
while stars fly..

Wings of new moon,
flare as festivals of delight,
in tune.

We praise,
eternal light~
rays.

When lanterns paint the sky,
flare as festivals of delight~
rays.

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Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2024 at 2:25 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

I Am Anaya

January 30, 2024 at 2:34 PM

Congratulations on your high placement Ink! I too chose "A Festival of Lights In November" 11/8/2022 nonet. :)

Linda Alice Fowler

January 30, 2024 at 7:32 AM

I think of the Chinese Lanterns when zi read this Inky. Each a wish for a better and brighter future. So nice. Congratulations! :)

Ink Empress

January 30, 2024 at 10:44 AM

Thank you so much dear linda, congratulations also i appreciate your comment

Mohan Chutani

January 29, 2024 at 6:24 PM

Dear Ink, thanks for participating in my contest. pefect imagery of celebrations with painted sky, flares, flying stars painting a canvas of delight. Congratulations for your placement. Wishing you best for New Year and times ahead. Mohan.

Ink Empress

January 30, 2024 at 10:45 AM

Thank you so very much for appreciating my efforts, i am so very grateful. And i wish you a blessed and wonderful year ahead with success and good health. Thank you again

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 8:02 AM

Creative if for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

January 21, 2024 at 7:42 PM

An uplifting poem of celebration, it is always welcome to hear. A charming, as well as, charmingly different, poem.

Sotto Poet

January 21, 2024 at 4:32 PM

It's hard to find any oversight in your poetry, Dearest Ink. This reading experience was enchanting and captivating. When lanterns paint the sky—it was the first statement that really struck me. You are very talented and creative. It seems like you had this form down and mastered.

Paige Hind

January 21, 2024 at 3:53 PM

This is really, really beautiful. I am enchanted, want to see them...

Jude Herrick

January 21, 2024 at 2:45 PM

I can't wait for that day ! I love this,... these mechanical fireflies shaking hands with life's butterflies, joy, impending the soon dawning of a new age when war maxhines are converted into plow-shares.

Paula Goldsmith

January 21, 2024 at 9:27 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write/ending. Light up the sky with your write. Good Luck... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Joseph May

January 21, 2024 at 8:07 AM

Wonderful write Empress, best wishes

Lioness Onpaper

January 21, 2024 at 6:40 AM

Omg that opening line!!!! When lanterns paint the sky…. That imagery is freaking delicious!!!! I'll weave tulsi trinkets, celebrate divine sight… how you make such gorgeous artistry… while stars fly.… mmmmmmm!! Like u have a hold on my breath … n ur words r the ones that can make them flow.. beautifully woven piece.. n the imagery is time stopping papi..

Ink Empress

January 21, 2024 at 7:19 AM

Ah papi you da best! Thank you so much always for reading my poems

Vijay Pandit

January 21, 2024 at 6:34 AM

Perhaps the best articulation I have read of this contest theme, Ink. Splendidly descriptive despite the awkward format this form demands. You always shine, my friend.

Ink Empress

January 21, 2024 at 7:18 AM

Wow that’s a massive compliment dear Vijay. Thank you so very much for your unwavering support always. Truly i am grateful for your kindness always

Silent One

January 21, 2024 at 5:56 AM

This is not really a form I like very much, but you seem to have done it so well.. nice idea for the them and it rhymes and flows so well.. some good lines like 'flare as festivals of delight' and lanterns paint the sky.. best of luck in the contest dear poet..

Ink Empress

January 21, 2024 at 7:18 AM

Thank you dear poet , I appreciate your support. Always! Thank you for always encouraging me. Grateful for your poetic presence

Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 5:52 AM

Dearest Ink, what a magical and breathtaking poem you've woven effortlessly with such gorgeous wordplay.. Minichu is a tricky form, but you've nailed it here with the celebratory ambience as well as the descriptive imagery.. I love your pristine word combinations here especially, "tulsi trinkets" Wow! Tulsi is a scared plant of India and I love how you've knitted that, so elegantly.. Almost feels dreamy and whimsical.. "Wings of new moon" Ahh, gosh our moon shines always such bright glow shining

Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 6:07 AM

I love "When lanterns paint the sky" And the highlight of festive glory rising so breathtakingly in these lines.. Best wishes for the contest, you have really excelled in this, keep writing and shining always.. Sending you so much love & light always :)

Ink Empress

January 21, 2024 at 6:04 AM

Ah angelic star thank you so much, i love finding out about different cultures and traditions, india is a beautiful place. I love Indian culture/ tradition etc so happy that you noticed thank you for your encouragement