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Celebrate the Fourth

```~~~!```~~~!*+*!~~~```!~~~``` Burst of sound and colors Crackles, display of red, green and gold Dancing sparkles excite a chorus of aahhhs Explosion of pops and the "Star spangled Banner" plays The night quiets and I take your hand on the walk home... . ```````""" ``` ' '```````` ###***//// //// \\\\ //// \\\\ ////

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Date: 8/13/2010 3:05:00 AM
Wow, how did I miss this one.. Love the rareness of it Doris, love Wilma Ps: you made me laugh out loud at your comment about the warning signs.. enjoy your day :)
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:10:00 PM
What a cool poem Doris. It's very creative and festive too!
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:11:00 AM
Nicely done and expressive with this layot, Doris! Thank you for your kind comment on "Lost" and your congrats!...Have a great day...Gert
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:59:00 PM
Love the message and the layout is superb, Doris. You're quite a multi-talented artist! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/6/2010 9:14:00 AM
Great write...Reads like an exciting time with the fireworks going off ...Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:07:00 AM
Awesome Doris, oh yes good morning,, sounds nice and romantic,,,enjoyed,..p.d.
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