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Caves - Ins and Outs

Caves are dark, dank, sinister havens for rising damp Mere cavities in the ground, veiled from light of day Yet caves are heralded, admired and cherished For a swarm of reasons, just mind the bats Caves are drop inns Hikers and natives welcome finding a cave They provide shelter from wind and rain A great place to stay the night, light a fire To enjoy the cosy charm of safe seclusion Caves are art galleries The walls are dotted with new and ancient graffiti Hand-prints, paintings, scribbles and scenes Made by artists with no where else to hang their stuff Revealed by flickering flames and dim filtered beams of light Caves are museums and dumps Visitors leave their junk in caves Animals topple in and get trapped Caves are a great place for animals to die These dumps are bliss to archaeologists Who drool over skeletons, artefacts and such old-time junk Caves are cathedrals and awe-catches Endless aeons of dirty drips yield fabulous On floor and ceiling displays of Glistening stalactites and stalagmites The cavernous space, silence and eerie dankness Makes visitors gasp with adoration and awe Highlighted by the uniqueness, isolation and remoteness of caves So duck-in to a cave when you pass one by and you'll discover the ins and outs of caves Caves are awesome and strangely welcoming Despite their darkness, dampness and malevolence

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Date: 7/6/2017 7:57:00 AM
I love spelunking! One of my favorites: The Secret Caves in Mexico. A small tour of walking and swimming and one point of lights out and silence. Loved it!!
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Date: 10/27/2016 12:33:00 PM
Very descriptive work about caves..Never been in one except when it was a paid visit with a tour group..Maybe if it was a very large opening that I could enter from and easily escape..LOL..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 8/3/2016 5:08:00 PM
A beautiful, educational write that I thoroughly enjoyed. I wonder if you entered the cave contest? Truly - very enjoyable, John ... CayCay
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Date: 8/3/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thanks for your kind feedback. I am now following you. Cheers

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