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Caves - Ins and Outs

Caves are dark, dank, sinister havens for rising damp
Mere cavities in the ground, veiled from light of day
Yet caves are heralded, admired and cherished
For a swarm of reasons, just mind the bats

Caves are drop inns
Hikers and natives welcome finding a cave
They provide shelter from wind and rain
A great place to stay the night, light a fire
To enjoy the cosy charm of safe seclusion

Caves are art galleries
The walls are dotted with new and ancient graffiti
Hand-prints, paintings, scribbles and scenes
Made by artists with no where else to hang their stuff
Revealed by flickering flames and dim filtered beams of light

Caves are museums and dumps
Visitors leave their junk in caves
Animals topple in and get trapped
Caves are a great place for animals to die
These dumps are bliss to archaeologists
Who drool over skeletons, artefacts and such old-time junk

Caves are cathedrals and awe-catches
Endless aeons of dirty drips yield fabulous
On floor and ceiling displays of
Glistening stalactites and stalagmites
The cavernous space, silence and eerie dankness
Makes visitors gasp with adoration and awe
Highlighted by the uniqueness, isolation and remoteness of caves

So duck-in to a cave when you pass one by
and you'll discover the ins and outs of caves
Caves are awesome and strangely welcoming
Despite their darkness, dampness and malevolence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/6/2017 7:57:00 AM
I love spelunking! One of my favorites: The Secret Caves in Mexico. A small tour of walking and swimming and one point of lights out and silence. Loved it!!
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Date: 10/27/2016 12:33:00 PM
Very descriptive work about caves..Never been in one except when it was a paid visit with a tour group..Maybe if it was a very large opening that I could enter from and easily escape..LOL..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 8/3/2016 5:08:00 PM
A beautiful, educational write that I thoroughly enjoyed. I wonder if you entered the cave contest? Truly - very enjoyable, John ... CayCay
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Date: 8/3/2016 10:54:00 PM
Thanks for your kind feedback. I am now following you. Cheers

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