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Caught In A Web, They Cannot Dis-enmesh

You, with your everlasting sorrow mom deserve nifty hands and healing ways of You, who always loved with the truest calm now sit bereft of food and needs God's glove You, the womb that bore consecrated Zen sit still with your emptiness praying that You, will once more be as fertile as a hen fresh as the ocean in God's special vat You, who have given us bounty with grace have birthed a sapling, a seed, and the bud You, Mother Earth whos honest clean faced has always provided with substance and sud They, who have loitered and taken your fresh, are caught in a web, they cannot dis-enmesh.

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Date: 11/28/2024 8:47:00 AM
Indeed, we need to take better care of our planet -- our spirits are entwined. Great read!
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Date: 11/28/2024 1:08:00 PM
We are definitely entwined so it should always matter how we treat each other and our beloved planet Joe !
Date: 11/28/2024 8:20:00 AM
Dear Rose, I loved your Sonnet reflection on the complexities of love, sacrifice, and the burdens we carry. Rose, your wonderful verses beautifully encapsulates the nurturing spirit of motherhood and the profound impact it has on our lives. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/28/2024 1:08:00 PM
thank you for your kind visit and generous comment Daniel, a special greeting to you !
Date: 11/26/2024 10:37:00 AM
I seem to have lost my touch, especially with rhyme. A brilliant sonnet with great flow and perfect structure.
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Date: 11/26/2024 6:52:00 PM
Nah, you still go it Victor, maybe the muse is just taking a break, your still one of the best here. :)
Date: 11/26/2024 7:08:00 AM
beautiful, we owe a lot to our mother, nice reading
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Date: 11/26/2024 6:52:00 PM
Yes we do dear Yann thanks for leaving a comment
Date: 11/25/2024 11:30:00 AM
Lovely sonnet my friend..
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Date: 11/25/2024 7:27:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by my poetry Silent, One :)
Date: 11/25/2024 9:52:00 AM
Nice uplifting poem.
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Date: 11/25/2024 7:27:00 PM
Thank you for your comment dear Jay
Date: 11/25/2024 4:18:00 AM
Dear rose, as always your empathetic soul, feels not just for human beings but all that is around holding this world and life together, and all that this earth too endures you feel and can be evident as i read this sonnet woven with excellent rhymes and flow, soulfully meaningful and powerful poem this is, speaks volumes! Pleasure always reading your kind words. Sending you light today and always
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Date: 11/25/2024 7:27:00 PM
Thank you for reading dear Ink, your comments are so valuable to my soul :)

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