Caught In a Tango At Cape Horn

CAUGHT IN A TANGO AT CAPE HORN whistles while he works ~ pavement is free of debris on America’s south side her slender feet slide across legend’s windswept deck ~ tremulous tango he boldly takes her ~ sure-footed and sensuous her décolletage dips a tortuous storm ~ a breathless virgin lighthouse her knees nearly faint firmly upholds her in frenetic funnel dance ~ she dares to glance up downdraft makes her swoon ~ spinning ballerina toes caught in full embrace with weak pulse she smiles and balances as she walks cautiously away her cheeks wide-hip pink he attempts to grab her shawl ~ she slides the glass door unabashedly asks her for another dance his pulse beating fresh she smooths down her dress as sea salt whispers romance ~ she repins her hair 8/24/2017 Blowing in the wind contest
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Krampe Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Wow, this is great! Tango is my favorite dance. Congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes! I've taken from my experience of cruising and my parent's cruise to Cape Horn :)
La France Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful write. I like your style!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 10:38 AM
Thanks so much, Constance!
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:39 AM
Back with congrats on your top win, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 10:38 AM
Thanks, Vijay!
Berggren Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Glad you had a good time rounding the Cape.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 1:37 PM
I haven't done it yet. My parents have. I was reading about the winds. Not always from personal experience. :)
Pandit Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:57 PM
A beautiful love poem--and an awesome tango dance!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Gentile Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:44 PM
I felt like I was in key West for a bit, Kim Really enjoyed, especially " sea salt whispers romance" Good Luck!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Thanks, Mike!
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