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Cathedral- Visual 1

Stand and bathe in blue diamond light
light painting the marble glory
glory by man's hand is praising
praising He who freely gives light


For the "Four Lines Only" Poetry Contest of nette onclaud
Based on visual number 1

Viv Wigley 8th June 2015

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Julia Ward Date: 7/28/2015 1:17:00 AM You're welcome. It's a lovely photo you've put here, Viv. Login to Reply

Julia Ward Date: 7/28/2015 12:59:00 AM I like it, but you need to change "he" to "He" to show you mean God, not man. Login to Reply Viv Wigley Date: 7/28/2015 1:09:00 AM Good point, Julia, I'll amend it. I kept looking at it over and over and wasn't fully happy with the poem, and it showed by not being placed. I've left it here to remind me. Nice of you to blow the dust off. Viv x

Peter Lewis Holmes Date: 6/15/2015 8:21:00 PM Nice smooth write Viv....Peter Login to Reply Viv Wigley Date: 6/15/2015 11:29:00 PM make it work, even. damn keyboard :) Viv Wigley Date: 6/15/2015 11:28:00 PM Thanks, Peter, tricky to it work. Best wishes, Viv

Paul Callus Date: 6/10/2015 9:43:00 AM Clever take on this visual, Viv! You give light to these smooth flowing lines. I see a winner here! // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 6/16/2015 4:34:00 PM :) the Maltese 'thank you' is appreciated:) Viv Wigley Date: 6/10/2015 12:00:00 PM Grazzi, Paul. A tricky form to flow well, but I think I managed to sort of turn it full circle. Regards, Viv

Judy Konos Date: 6/8/2015 9:58:00 PM I just stopped to swellerer wellerer you that this is good...very Login to Reply Viv Wigley Date: 6/8/2015 11:15:00 PM I appreciate your comments, Judy, and consequently I am of a thankerary disposition toward you. May your day today be more gooderer than yesterday. Viv x

Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/8/2015 6:05:00 PM Just lovely! It will do well. BG Login to Reply Viv Wigley Date: 6/8/2015 11:11:00 PM Thanks, Barbara, very kind. Love 'n hugs, Viv x

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2015 3:26:00 PM I love how you did your theme around light!! Very fitting for the picture and best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Viv Wigley Date: 6/8/2015 11:09:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. A tricky form, and the wrap over of words I find make it difficult to get a flow. Your entry managed it effortlessly. I must practise more. Viv x

Casarah Nance Date: 6/8/2015 6:56:00 AM Praising he who freely gives light-oh I love how you shine with this four line write! :) hugsxx Login to Reply Viv Wigley Date: 6/8/2015 8:00:00 AM Thanks, Casarah, lovely to hear from you, I hope you are more wellerer than a really well person. Yes, folks, today's word is wellerer. Viv x

Jan Allison Date: 6/8/2015 1:57:00 AM You captured the image perfectly with this spiritual write - I hope this will do really well for you in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/8/2015 6:20:00 AM I REALLY like this one Mr Viv:-) Hugs Jan x Viv Wigley Date: 6/8/2015 6:17:00 AM Thanks, Jan, you too. Viv x