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small snow birds gather on a bent backyard feeder . . . cat footprints in white ________________________ March 8, 2018 Poetry/Haiku/cat footprints Copyright Protected, ID 18-1260-997-01 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Submitted into the Premier contest, Best Haiku New/Old sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke Third Place

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Date: 6/18/2020 5:23:00 AM
Constance, congrats. Very fine imagery of footprints. Mohan
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:22:00 PM
Mohan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 6/18/2020 5:21:00 AM
This is beautiful and mysterious at the same time. Love the open ending. Congratulations on your win Constance :) Blessings and love
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:23:00 PM
Aditi, thanks so much for the congratulation and the nice comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 6/18/2020 4:19:00 AM
Marvelous haiku, Constance - beauty and mood with a bit of danger crimped on the edges ... I like that! Congrats and blessings, Friend! :o)
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:24:00 PM
Greg, thanks for the compliment on my haiky and for the congrats, yes, for a bird there is danger everywhere _Constance
Date: 6/18/2020 3:45:00 AM
I love the winter image Constance, congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:25:00 PM
Tom, thanks for the congrats and compliment _Constance
Date: 6/18/2020 1:55:00 AM
This is an excellent haiku where nature blooms with your fine choice of kigo and that aha moment is exquisite! This is going into my Faves Constance. It is First place for me! Congratulations on your wonderful podium win! Blessings xxoo Guess I already faved it! : )
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:26:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the excellent and the nice comment, and the FAV and of course the congratulations _Constance
Date: 6/17/2020 10:04:00 PM
Your verse brings this to life, especially 'bent bird feeder' and the image of cat prints in snow - congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:27:00 PM
Michelle, thanks for the congratulations and the nice comment_Constance
Date: 6/17/2020 7:21:00 PM
Such an evocative haiku, Dear Heart. The serene scene yet danger just a whisker away. Great contrast with your last line! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:27:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 6/17/2020 5:36:00 PM
So sweet. I can sure picture it. Congrats, Dear Heart.
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:31:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 6/17/2020 5:13:00 PM
charming imagery Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/17/2020 5:23:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit and compliment, I have always loved this one _Constance