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Cat

I walked up his creaking steps To the world’s most cluttered front porch Kicking aside a chair, I knock I hear some scrambling from inside The door whips open. My friend smiles. “Welcome to my humble abode, You really made it just in time.” I walk in and take off my shoes He points to the cat, crouched, quiet “You really made it just in time.” Like a crossbow bolt, the cat darts But the moth flies up and away The cat let out a sad yowl Looking defeated, slinks away. “I really made it just in time.”

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Date: 1/8/2023 7:27:00 PM
Yes, you did just make it in time ! ! Oh, my ! Your thoughts truly had me in suspense. I wasn't sure how this would end. You certainly had me on the edge of my seat. My best to you, Corey. ~ Brandy
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Corey Bryan
Date: 1/8/2023 7:33:00 PM
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, Brandy! I appreciate the comment so much.

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