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> FICTION <

for Sara

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The radiant shine leaves your aurora dimming ever so quickly, as in northern regions you are—borealis falling into the southernmost Sahara negative gradients descend—australis The gloss of moral sanction The glitter of a social butterfly The prism of a love sonnet I thought it would never end False is an outward appearance Black smoke puffed charcoal ashes spread amongst the masses Snuffed are the soft eider white reminiscence Left are the burnt embers of memory Janus face so striking truant tradeoffs at any cost totality misleading, yet, narcissism becomes you A most plebeian diagnosis Self-absorbed egotist with delusions of grandeur You’ll popularize popularity while it condemns you, A cowardice, believing YOU were a soldier Yet you hid when all else fought for you a fair weathered friend is no friend at all You’ve painted a Renoir of you an illusion, it's a Goya—El Greco! A bruting intimacy restrained a duality in an Art Deco mask off, mask on Disguise! Hide what’s just another espy I was wrong about you... Words spread eloquently A perennial drone others reality If cruelty, are your real realms Then I am just another casualty Taken in by your devilish charms when Moon and Sun collide allied with the charred stars A false hope maker dream taker, heartbreaker, faker Fare thee well... You’re of them No one special after all a let down draining I want no part of you

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Date: 5/3/2025 3:25:00 AM
A marvellous fictional write Anaya, truly amazing… Beryl
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Date: 5/3/2025 12:07:00 AM
Wow. I see this will be a winner. Love your approach here. Great metaphors
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Date: 5/2/2025 1:38:00 PM
"a false hope maker, dream taker, heartbreaker, faker." This fictitious cad is receiving his/her comeuppance. Excellent take on the theme Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2025 2:06:00 PM
Got me, I'll post one soon. I'll Tap dance on it
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/2/2025 1:58:00 PM
Um, you've got five columns. Give me a hint
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2025 1:49:00 PM
Ha, too much fun, i love the English chap, he does my poetry justice. I just may have mine own sneaked in, when no one was looking...you'll have to search for it! I love fun games ~ Ty, Tommy
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/2/2025 1:41:00 PM
PS. Would love to hear you do your own narration
Date: 5/2/2025 12:22:00 PM
Deep agony, and honesty - no real comment, but I know what you're talking about
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2025 12:49:00 PM
Paige, yes it is what the contest called for, honesty and its agony! ')
Date: 5/2/2025 12:08:00 PM
A powerful write. Great Ending... People can cause so much pain for No reason. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing away..............
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2025 12:48:00 PM
I am careful not to cause such pain sweet Paula, but some do and must take a pause, and read about themselves, if the shoe fits that is. TY! you as well ~ ')
Date: 5/2/2025 11:20:00 AM
Dear Anaya, this is a wonderful poem that covers issues of disappointment, betrayal, and the superficiality of relationships. It expresses displeasure in someone who displays a fake front, displaying their timidity and lack of honesty. The use of light and darkness, as well as natural images, emphasizes the difference between perception and reality. Good luck with the contest
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/2/2025 12:45:00 PM
I can always dwell on your sincere reviews and thoughts, my dearest poet SP sotto voce, and rely on your truths, insights. Overwhelming are the betrayals when we assume otherwise. All fictious of course ~ Ty!

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