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Castles and Dreams In the Sand

~~Castles and Dreams in the Sand.~~ The waves roll in onto the golden sand Washing past dreams and castles away. Cleansing, taking the memories back from the land To be replaced by the new ones today. Build me a castle sings the voice of a child My son and the delight of my eyes. Watching him splashing in waves so calm and mild My thankfulness at him is still no surprise. The waves ripple, lazy pebbles don’t roll I wonder at the price I still have to pay This child of mine; the God given gift of a soul His sprightly moves, his childish laughter so fey. A castle I will build, but my boy is the foundation He lies in the sand, his laughter sings on the breeze. A bucket here a bucket there, a remake of Gods fine creation The shape forms it is a merboy and it happens with ease. The childish giggle He tries hard to keep still He’s all of a wiggle I wonder at his perfection still. The waves roll in my merboy lies in the sand He turns and kisses me with love and says goodbye. He says to me “you knew it was not real as he waves his mer hand” He flicks his tail, he is gone and I sit and I wonder why. This perfect creation so alive and so real He is gone from my life with a kiss The waves rolling in I remembered the deal "You can have your boy for five years as your wish." The price for a child you offered, five years of a life But remember that he will live on You gladly accepted the deal to be a mother and wife ~~Remember the kiss and the deal - now he has gone.~~
© Contest Entry For: Sandcastles By the Seashore sponsored By Gail Doyle By: Mandy Tams ~Golden Girl~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/30/2014 1:58:00 PM
Mandy So sweet and sentimental. The passion and heartfelt emotion allows the reader to feel what you are expressing. Thank you for the nice comment on my Melted Away poem
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/1/2014 2:23:00 AM
Thanks Robin, must admit I always enjoy your work xx
Date: 8/13/2014 11:39:00 AM
Why does one never tier of your poetry,,everytime one returns it is as fresh as the day the waves rolled in, just another amazing piece of poetry,,,,
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Date: 5/19/2012 12:51:00 AM
This was a very touching poem Mandy and meant a lot to me. You really deserved your win. The sandcastle will go but your dream and your poem will live on.
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Date: 5/18/2012 6:06:00 PM
So deeply moving ~GG~ I love it deerly...Congratulations on your win...big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:30:00 PM
Like the great silkies!! Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Sandcastles" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 3:41:00 PM
Loved it when I first read it - love it still today. Glad I could help. Joe
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Date: 5/18/2012 3:38:00 PM
congrats, Mandy, wonderful poem. harry
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:48:00 AM
congrats on your win Mandy..
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:22:00 AM
Mandy congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 5/15/2012 7:16:00 PM
What a beautiful tale. Sad and moving and fun to read the giggles and wiggles - just like a little boy.
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:48:00 AM
bonjour! bet i got it wrong, didn't get it wrong reading this, you seemed to have blended memories with today aspects, yet such a sadness towards the end. love this mandy. harry
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:48:00 AM
bonjour! bet i got it wrong, didn't get it wrong reading this, you seemed to have blended memories with today aspects, yet such a sadness towards the end. love this mandy. harry
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Date: 5/15/2012 6:17:00 AM
Mandy, this is bloody good, good luck..David
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/15/2012 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Dave, I got my symbol in xx
Date: 5/15/2012 6:06:00 AM
Beautifully written...great imagery..it was as if i was there watching all along..beautiful.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 5/15/2012 6:09:00 AM
Why thank you Pace I appreciate your time and comment xx
Date: 5/15/2012 5:45:00 AM
Nice poem........hope your poem do well in the contest..
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