Castles

Evanescent, yet forever shall stay... a sandcastle in the eyes of a dreamer, washed away.....

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2025 4:19:00 PM

Beautiful, Rick ~ congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2025 6:18:00 AM

wonderful, Rick. A well deserved first placement

Ink Empress

Date: 5/29/2025 2:19:00 AM

Dear Rick, I love the dreamy ambience of your word weaving and how it flows, dreamers dream away amidst all! I also love your use of the word evanescent here! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Sending you light.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/13/2025 1:14:00 PM

Nice portrayal of what can be lost, Rick but Dreamers will continue to dream.