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You see the ugly scars I see the beauty inside You see the struggles and worries I see the strength that makes it worth it You see the pain and sorrow I see second chances in the morning Listen… to the touch of a pen Who understands your need To give back a piece of you A part of your heart and soul A chunk of your hope and faith A sample of mercy and grace Portions of your spirit’s praise Inspiration sings praises into The kindness of a psalm Portraying the evidence Of hope that lingers on and on Lifting up the dismal heart With light, laughter and love Whispered in the prayers Of one who breathes in The music of a sincere belief If I were a star… I’d look down to those soft wishes Made on my twinkling shimmer Enlightening the heart with a quiver Of intimate hues that shadow the sparkle With halos of pure, untainted love You are the kindness beneath my concern The victory that comes when I have won The inspiration that brings my vision to life The consideration that brightens even sunlight Stanzas taken from my poems: Real Beauty God's Kiss Whispers of Grace If I Were A Star What You Are Rewritten to form this poem on February 27, 2021 Entered in John lawless' Fragments of Verse Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/14/2021 12:19:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent, exemplified in this edifying piece. God bless you.
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Date: 4/13/2021 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful, inspirational blending that flows as one piece. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/13/2021 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Have a blessed day..........
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Date: 4/13/2021 6:28:00 AM
Excellent chosen and woven Regina. A smooth compilation of thought and inspiration. I found the opening lines to be a challenge to read on. Beautifully done.
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Date: 2/27/2021 3:02:00 AM
This part was more than enough."If I were a star… I’d look down to those soft wishes Made on my twinkling shimmer Enlightening the heart with a quiver Of intimate hues that shadow the sparkle With halos of pure, untainted love" Good luck in the contest. This is a winner!
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