Cast To the Wind

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you will fly away like glitter cast to the wind making not a sound

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2015 4:04:00 PM

I really like this, Lin. well done.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2015 4:14:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Andrea...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 6:08:00 AM

quite sad Lin but poetry wise nice~Olive ELoisa =`)

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2015 6:12:00 AM

Sad moods bring about my incentive, Olive. If I could be so inclined by happiness, I'd be writing all day and night..lol Thanks for your many visits.

Tim Smith

Date: 12/7/2015 4:13:00 PM

Fantastic Lin...so apropos....I wrote something for our leaving poet as well

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thanks, Tim. I think I'll just tie him to his computer so he can't gt away.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2015 2:22:00 PM

I certainly hope he doesn't fly away Lin - many on soup will be very sad if he disappears without a trace:-( hugs jan xx7

Lin Lane
Date: 12/7/2015 2:45:00 PM

A lot of us do , JAN...thanks for encouragement...for him. Big hugs for commenting.