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Cast Away--Wilson the Volleyball

A stranded lone man
talking to a volleyball...
personified friend

though only listens
it gives him inspiration...
wilson the friend




© kashinath karmakar (Dec 2011)
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Placement:9th;(Dec 2011)

Contest:Senryu me a movie Scene

Sponsor:Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/2/2012 9:50:00 PM KASH..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/11/2012 1:53:00 AM belated congrats, kashi.. how you were able t tell a story in such few words is amazing!!.. soupy mail! Login to Reply

Tirzah Conway Date: 1/9/2012 9:48:00 AM WILSON!!! I love this movie - Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~ Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/9/2012 7:25:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/8/2012 11:11:00 AM Hi, Kash, finally I can come here and tell you thanks for doing my contest though I know a movie senryu is hard for someone not a movie buff. This was cute. I remember the movie and really liked it. Congrats on your win with me and Nikko.Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/7/2012 2:35:00 PM Congratulations on your fine win, Kash. Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/7/2012 1:50:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 1/7/2012 12:35:00 PM Ahh who could ever forget Wilson?? This one captured that moment well... it had this simplicity about it but it brings the movie clearly-- Congrats on your win, Kash! :D Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/7/2012 3:11:00 AM hi Kash...I really like both senryu but the 2nd one grabs me the most. The final line is strong with its simplicity...congrats to you. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/2/2012 7:22:00 AM got to be in the winners circle this Kash, brilliant. Happy New Year. harry Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/2/2012 6:44:00 AM Koolio take on the Tom Hanks movie "Castaway" - good luck in the contest Kash & a Happy New Year to you :) Login to Reply

Greg Stanley Date: 1/2/2012 12:31:00 AM Absolutly perfect... a winner indeed, captured it so well, best of luck in the contest, Greg Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/1/2012 6:07:00 PM DING DING DING.........W I N N E R !!!!!!! Excellent senryu, Kash. How DO U DO IT???? Had to rewrite mine completely bc it wasn't descriptive of the scene...oh well...this one rocks. Merry New Year! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/1/2012 4:50:00 PM Happy New Year Kash,,, Did you know that his ball wilson, had a secret part in the cartoon movie MADAGASCAR" and another movie... can't remember the other one i'd seen it in... That ball be came real famous.... And can you imagine the advertisement alone on the name brand of the volley ball was pretty sneaky....love that movie... great senryu....always,..p.d. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/1/2012 4:02:00 PM Cute.. Got a chuckle..Interesting topic and presentation..Thanks for stopping by..May this be the greatest year of your life up to this point..Sara Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/1/2012 12:05:00 PM Stunning entry for Andrea's contest Kash!! All the best for the contest :) Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 1/1/2012 11:13:00 AM Kash, a wonderful Senryu and entry for the contest. I enjoyed the read, best to you~Caryl Soup mail Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/1/2012 9:45:00 AM Liked the movie and Tom Hanks did a great job with Wilson the ball. Happy New Years to you and your family. love phyl Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/1/2012 6:57:00 AM Great movie here!! Tom Hanks is my fav... Best of luck in the contest... Happy New Year my friend.... Michael Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/1/2012 2:38:00 AM you bring back poignant memories, kashi buddy.. a poetic gem that is a winner for me!.. may the new year bring you much serneity and bliss.:) huggs and thanks for everything! Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 12/31/2011 11:57:00 PM Sounds like that guy is in need of friends. If my only friend was a volleyball, I would be in terrible shape. Good write Kash. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 12/31/2011 2:29:00 PM Nicely worded your write, loved it. Happy New 2012, bl Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 12/31/2011 9:55:00 AM Kash best tribute I ever read to a ball, love it, good luck, Happy New Year..David Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 12/30/2011 8:55:00 PM The Best Supporting Act goes to Wilson! if ever a volleyball could win an Oscar. Nicely done kash, you captured the loneliness yet enlighten moment at the same time. Login to Reply

Tony Lane Date: 12/30/2011 6:07:00 PM Sometimes the best friend only listens. Those would be the ones who were not first in the birth order like me. We can't help but to give our advice. Login to Reply

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