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Case Study-Big Elf On the Shelf

Big elf on the shelf, he let out a rumb’, so loud, that the kid saw a cookie crumb’ and milk overturn. Elf’s rump in a burn and Christmas smells bad from the elfish fumb’. 11/15/2022 A Fun Holiday Limerick Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
To keep the lines to 10 syllables - rumb’, crumb’, and fumb’ = rumble, crumble and fumble

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Date: 11/26/2022 7:28:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your win Kim! :)
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Date: 11/24/2022 10:43:00 PM
Very interesting, indeed! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/24/2022 10:29:00 AM
Kim, a cute and clever one, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 11/24/2022 9:55:00 AM
Silly fun here!! Big congrats to you, Kim
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Date: 11/22/2022 3:00:00 PM
Put the elf back on the shelf, where he can stay by himself! A witty Christmas ditty. Robert
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Date: 11/20/2022 8:33:00 AM
Hahaha Kim! So funny! Thanks for the chuckles :)) Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2022 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 11/19/2022 6:10:00 PM
Hilarious, indeed ! Has brought a smile to me ! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2022 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa! So glad you enjoy limericks too :)
Date: 11/19/2022 5:49:00 AM
Oh my! Funny one Kim..lol :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2022 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 11/16/2022 1:04:00 AM
Funny and clever. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2022 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/15/2022 7:15:00 PM
Funny indeed, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jo! :)
Date: 11/15/2022 6:47:00 PM
I like the way you cut off the rhyming words. Very effective! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 11/15/2022 11:16:00 AM
Got a chuck' from me. (Chuckle)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2022 11:28:00 AM
LOL…thanks for playing along. You gave me a chuckle!
Date: 11/15/2022 8:26:00 AM
Lol, hols your Jose's. Good luck Kim Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2022 11:28:00 AM
LOL…thanks!
Date: 11/15/2022 8:19:00 AM
Quite funny.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2022 11:28:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!

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