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Carousel of Dreams

Love circles a carousel of dreams, the heart embraces a moment of bliss - while fingers entwine the umbrella of hope - patiently waiting for that ever after kiss -------------------- ~ Just a little scribble about love ~

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Tom Woody

Date: 9/18/2023 10:29:00 AM

Ahh, first kiss. Always the best. Spine tingling, nerves on edge, adrenaline rush. All within a carousel of dreams

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/18/2023 6:00:00 PM

Yes, that first kiss can create many emotions within. You feel anxious, yet excited, all at the same time. It's like being on a carousel. :) You feel like you're floating on cloud nine. Thank you, Tom. :) Softly smiling at you.

Joseph May

Date: 4/30/2023 2:15:00 PM

Brandy, I love the fairytale ending to this romantic write, Hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/30/2023 5:36:00 PM

Joseph, thank you for your lovely comment. At the end of fairy-tale's, they always seem to have a happily ever after. My heart smiles knowing this. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/1/2018 9:15:00 PM

Your whole poem pulls us in: circles, embraces, entwines... lovely, Brandy! Hugs...Kim

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2018 10:45:00 PM

Thank you Kim. Your kind words bring a smile. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 9/25/2018 2:23:00 PM

Lovely.... we all look for a happily ever after..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/25/2018 7:35:00 PM

Yes, and happy ever after does exist. :) Thank you Silent One. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/23/2018 7:26:00 AM

Another romantic spin on the carousel of life..you paint love and romance with a skilled pen, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/23/2018 9:02:00 AM

:) Thank you Vijay. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/23/2018 3:15:00 AM

A gorgeous write, Dear friend, with just the right words, and just the right emotion ... I long for a spin on that dreamy carousel, and the sweet air that it stirs! Blessings! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/23/2018 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Greg. :) Sometimes, less is so much more. The dreamy carousel of love is always spinning. Keep your heart open, because all good things come to those who wait. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/22/2018 11:09:00 PM

The title is beautiful as is the poem.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/23/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you Caren. :) You and your kind words are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/22/2018 9:20:00 PM

The only thing that we need more of is more love... Excellent. Well penned.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/23/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you and you are right. More Love is needed indeed. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/22/2018 7:08:00 PM

May the cherubs send you wishes & kisses...as they ride their 'carousel of dreams'...lovely scribble as you nibble at love...love & lightly nibbling lol...^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/22/2018 8:10:00 PM

No...thank you kissy sissy lol...love & wishes of kisses lol...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/22/2018 7:58:00 PM

That may happen. It seems that wishes ride a carousel of dreams, while kisses like being playful. :) Naughty lips nibbling. Lol. Thank you WW. Love and Light kissing. Lol. ~ Brandy

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/22/2018 6:58:00 PM

I'm waiting! I'm waiting! Lovely poem.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/22/2018 7:46:00 PM

Soft smile. :) Maybe that fairy-tale kiss will find you soon. Thank you for your kind words. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 9/22/2018 6:51:00 PM

“Love waits patiently for those who dare to dream” and if you are patient that ever after kiss will come. Thank you for sharing your thoughts of love. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/22/2018 7:41:00 PM

Yes, you are absolutely right John. And- all good things come to those who wait. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) I appreciate you and your kindness. ~ Brandy