Carousel

All of my tokens consumed in the ride,
Mounted on my stallion, a popinjay of lively colors,
Sunlight glistens, inviting me to bask in its rays,
As I cling to the cool steel like embracing a lover.

Each moment the spectators pass me,
Or am I the passerby – a casual acquaintance,
Futile analysis just awakens cerebral juices,
As I steal a piece of them to carry along my journey. 

Mirrors, once pulsating with endless laughter,
Cast a dim reflection of a stranger hauntingly familiar,
Something in the gaze, the turn of the lips,
Reminders of a childhood friend buried in mind's recesses.

I feel the collapse of my spirit as the ride's end nears,
Just a small moment to reason with the Master Engineer,
“Slow the rotations, curse the darkness that sends me homeward,
I swear I'll be prudent – just one more token...maybe two...."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 4:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 10, 2016 at 12:25 AM
nice to see this one again. LINDA
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July 5, 2015 at 2:11 AM
Beth :) Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
Dominick Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Great poem - I've always had a thought to write a poem about a carousel but could never find the right words...loved you you expressed it. - All the best, Karen
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July 1, 2010 at 1:10 PM
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Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Great write that was well deserved feature this week..Congratulations....Sara
Brown Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Beth. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 7:09 AM
There is a lot of the child in this poem, and I love the child in everyone. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Fisher Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Nice imagery - many congrats on your featuret this week. Rgds Janette
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June 25, 2010 at 3:25 PM
The flow of this poem is excellent. I like how the title flows throughout the piece. This line is right on point, “Slow the rotations, curse the darkness that sends me homeward." Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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June 24, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Loved your poem, Beth...an original writing.Welcome to Poetry Soup! Emily
Brown Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:28 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Beth. Love, Carol
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June 24, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Good Day 2 you Beth: Wonderful poem!!! It reminds me of the many times that I rode a carousel in hopes of getting the brass ring. This poem also (in my opinion) has a little bit of a spiritual theme to it. Yours truly: Sheol
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June 23, 2010 at 7:32 PM
"all my tokens consumed in a ride", that was very clever to write,,, very unique,,, tokens of life lol riding and a want to keep inserting those coins,, loved it!!!...P.D.
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