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Carnal Is the Night

sultry eyes ablaze
   kindled by passion's desire
      carnal is the night

sensualhaiku

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Mark Koplin

August 12, 2020 at 9:14 AM

Carnal indeed! Another great one Lin! I do enjoy your talent for captivation.

Joseph May

November 16, 2019 at 9:46 PM

A fiery night of passion..Very nicely done Lin

Lin Lane

November 18, 2019 at 4:54 AM

Thank you so much.

M. L. Kiser

November 13, 2019 at 5:40 PM

A bit mysterious but wonderfully penned.

Lin Lane

November 13, 2019 at 5:53 PM

I think sensuality can sometimes be mysterious. Thanks for the comment.

Brenda Chiri

November 13, 2019 at 12:58 PM

Wow Lin amazing as always! Glad to see you back posting once again! I love this sultry piece you've written!;)

Lin Lane

November 13, 2019 at 5:52 PM

Merci, Brenda and thanks for stopping by to read me and leaving a great comment.

Winged Warrior

November 12, 2019 at 6:09 PM

I can't believe my eyes!... Laney twice in one week...Oh! happy days are here again...now just follow this rhythm, twice a week...I'm here to catch you if you fall lol...and I'll order some chili con carnal lol...love ya babe...^WW^ :o)

Lin Lane

November 12, 2019 at 6:18 PM

Twice in one week, and it's been 5 days since. I must've been on a wild spree of some sort, so don't get too used to it. Your comments are always fun-filled. This one is adorable. There's nothing chilly about con carnal!!! Sentiments are comin' back at ya!

Robert Lindley

November 11, 2019 at 1:44 PM

My friend, I believe in my youth that was exactly what I was looking for! A superbly crafted Haiku.. And a fine fav too...

Lin Lane

November 11, 2019 at 4:24 PM

Thanks for the honor of faving this write, Robert. It's greatly appreciated.

John Gondolf

November 9, 2019 at 9:34 AM

Eyes ablaze indeed. A wonderfully written, sensual poem perfect for this contest, Lin, I think it will place well. Best of luck. John

Lin Lane

November 9, 2019 at 9:46 AM

Thanks so much, John. It was an N/A...maybe it was too hot for Richard to consider or was supposed to be humorous. Sexy means something other than funny to me, but I appreciate your compliment of the write.

Chris Green

November 8, 2019 at 6:57 AM

Looks like I wasn't the only one warming things up on soup last night. Beautifully and sensually written my friend. Best wishes in the contest

Lin Lane

November 8, 2019 at 8:13 AM

They may have both created a steamy atmosphere. Thanks for the sweet comments, Chris.

John Hamilton

November 7, 2019 at 7:31 PM

Nice to see new offerings from you Lin, you are missed!

Lin Lane

November 8, 2019 at 4:28 AM

Thank you for such kind comments, JD. I apologize for not visiting PS more often to read you. I will; promise.

Jan Allison

November 7, 2019 at 6:33 PM

very sultry Lin, it's so lovely to see you posting again my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

November 7, 2019 at 6:39 PM

Thank you, Jan. I was a titch concerned that it may be a bit too sensual. As far as posting here, I have a couple of arm-twisting friends, and I find it difficult to deny them. Have a good night...hugs

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