Carnage Caused By Vanity

Above the clouds are buffalo aplenty
Shot by whites as Native Americans cried
The tribes made use of all portions of their prey
European settlers only sought their hides

Palin bragged of killing moose as a young child
Did this tough meat truly feed her family
Perhaps their heads were displayed o’er a fireplace
And Palin’s explanation -- chicanery

A dozen ducks once roamed a wooded forest
First babes, then mother, lost their lives to sportsmen
It makes you wonder who could eat so many
More likely targets for those with a killing yen

Early man killed only to survive the wild
Natural order brings hunters into play
There’s no “sport” in killing for other reasons
Souls of those needlessly killed rise above the fray

Staring down in sadness as others are shot
Where is the logic and the humanity
In amassing trophies while chugging down beer
Who can stop this carnage caused by vanity 


For Constance’s “I Am Sending You a Gift of Poetry, Dear Heart” contest
Inspired by “In a Patch of Heaven” by Constance~A Rambling Poet~
Written by Diane Locksley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loving Iii Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 6:40 AM
some do hunt for food. but unfortunatly there will always be the poachers. may in their heaven they become the animals they killed reborn.
Flach Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 4:37 PM
I am right with you Diane. Me? I hunt with a camera - same sense of being one with nature, tracking down the intended target, but less damaging when the shot is taken. I do not get the "sport" in hunting. Yes, some do eat their trophies - but they do not have to hunt and kill to feed their family - they do so for sport. As you say, vanity minus humanity. Nicely written. Good rhyme and good message. Joe
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November 6, 2010 at 6:46 AM
well done here my friend nice xx duncan
Brown Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Diane in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "I am Sending You a Gift of Poetry, Dear Heart". It is an honor to be on the list with you. Love, Carol
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October 2, 2010 at 12:19 AM
Diane, you have asked the question that beggars the mind with this work. Not only is its rhyme beautiful, but the message contained by your words gives it so much power. Congrats on your HM in the contest. Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:13 PM
wow, Diane, your poem probably has the greatest social message by far of all the poems in the contest. VERY well done and congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations on your very worthy win, dear Diane! Enjoy this victory!! Hope you're doing fine, girl. Love, Audrey
Johnson Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 5:40 PM
You said a lot in these short verses. Congratulations. on you hm. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Diane
Sweetheart Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Congrats Diane on your HM in Constance's contest with this lovely interpretation of her original poem inspiration.. enjoy your special honor tonight my friend with luv..
Sapp Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Diane; I have a summer cabin in Alaska and see this type of activity every summer. It's sickening and disheartening, particularly the plight of the Stellar Sea Lions. Wayne
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September 24, 2010 at 1:23 PM
It is a fact that nature is definitely misused by man due to his ignorance and indeed vanity or arrogance. Nature rises to try and make man see the need for respect and humility. Great write, Diame! Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my latest. Caroline.
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September 23, 2010 at 8:52 AM
You're right. Hunting for survival is a necessity, but killing for sport is a travesty. Well done, Diane! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Splendid poetry Diane. Hunting for murdering sake. At lewast the hunter gatherers did what they did for survival, and in most cases the species survived. Good luck in the contest with this most enjoyable piece >> James
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September 21, 2010 at 9:38 PM
excellent poem this, so many questions, none answered in this world to date, good luck with the contest. Diane i'm intrigue with your surname, being a fan of 'Robin Hood' in my youth in England. He being he Earl of Locksley? Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Yes Diane a beautiful spin off write of Constance's elegant piece which I also read tonight.. this is magnificent outpouring of mercy toward the forest creatures.. good luck..she will surely luv this piece... please don't worry or be hurt if some thought your first place in the senryu contest was unwarranted... this happens a lot on soup..not to be dismayed my friend.. shake off the critical comments and keep writing .. these excellent pieces.. see Chris's blog tonight luv..
Neels Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Diane, awesome title and your words spoke so true.. All the best for Constance's contest..
Freeman Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Love your title Diane. Yes of course all caranage is caused by the carnal minded concept, that is void of precept(Love). You made my day with your comment on my poem. Thanks so much. Agape, Moses
Benkhen Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 10:26 AM
I agree completely. There is no value for life when death is entertainment
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Good luck in the contest with this well deserving write..It is true that some people used all that they could about an animal __no waste...It is the same today..People have not changed some waste and some try very hard to save...Sara
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September 20, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem a bit sad, have a wonderful day,..p.d.
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