Cardinal

The years have stolen details from my mind.
Your face, once clear, has faded like a print
Within an album ready to unbind
And plunder from this sadness any hint

Of thinning strands and laughing lines around
The sweetest smile and brightest silver eyes.
I walk across the white, half-frozen ground.
As morning wanes, the wind begins to rise. 

The breeze relieves my sorrow like a sigh,
And, suddenly, as if by sacred cue -
A flash of red against the cobalt sky.
A cardinal of brilliant crimson hue!

And as the pangs of grief and joy collide,
I feel your spirit walking by my side.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cornish Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 4:49 PM
This is the perfect example why you should write more----I know! Call me Papa, because I will nudge you now and again to write....hey, do it because not only are you exceptional at it but because it will leave it even more than a simple diary but a cherished gift that time will share.
Flow Avatar
February 15, 2019 at 3:53 PM
beautiful, can relate to that collision in serene moments of beauty and remembering.. thanks again..
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Hello Heather Ober, so nice to meet you. This poem is written beautifully. I like the way you describe the Cardinal bird. Have a nice evening my friend.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Gorgeous sonnet Heather. xomo
Gondolf Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 6:49 AM
Heather, back to say congrats on your win for this wonderful sonnet. John
Watson Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 12:40 PM
This was wonderful to read,Heather. I've 'spotted' the cardinal in various poems throughout my time on this site. We obviously miss out on something special here in the UK!
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 11:29 AM
This is amazing Heather, was exactly what I was hoping for with this prompt. Congrats on a fine placement in a very tough contest to judge.
Zerbst Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 8:44 PM
Wonderfully worked poem, Heather. Haunting, yet vividly beautiful.
Cornish Avatar
January 7, 2019 at 8:40 AM
A natural talent Heather that you make the best of in both form and substance. If my memory recalls, your Grandmother lives in these thoughts.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 10:06 AM
This is exceptional Heather. A blessed New Year to you as well.
Green Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:40 AM
This was beautifully sad. Such a well constructed sonnet that should do well in the contest. Best wishes.
Gondolf Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 8:23 AM
What a wonderful sonnet, Heather, beautiful and melancholy. I have been having trouble coming up with one for this contest but you nailed it. Best of luck. John
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 11:09 AM
wow, perfect meter and it's also a very good example of beautiful sadness. Thanks for your comment on my enjambment. You are one of the only few doing it seamlessly too. LOVE that!! you showed it right here in this sonnet.
Sands Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 9:10 AM
This poem is absolutely gorgeous. Well written. Good luck in the contest! :)
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