Captured

Cecropia is carried through the night
on satin wings lined white in their design,
hovers over innocence by moonshine.
A fragrant flower has stopped him in his flight,
and on a petal he prepares to light.
He ceases fluttering so as to dine
upon sweet nectar of his valentine.
And I alone am witness to this sight.

The moth and orchid's union gladdens me
as wayside, I am frozen where I stand,
for what I've found, though simple it may be,
has purpose and is nothing short of grand.
Now captured by the beauty that I see,
I let my net slip gently from my hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Awesomely beautiful, Andrea. I can see it all so vividely. Outstanding Sonnet. Many congrat's on your FIRST PLACE win. Lainie
Smith Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on you first place win wonderful
Richards Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Simply beautiful, Andrea! You have such a wealth of wonderful sonnets...how do you ever choose which to enter??
Long Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 7:43 AM
congrats on your win with this great piece. cory
Osita Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 2:09 AM
Another amazing write! Andrea, Congrats on your well deserved first place win.cheers***
Onclaud Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 1:28 AM
oh andie, congrats on the top win which i share with you in a most humble way.. fantastic! :) huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 5:59 AM
What a beautiful imagery you have drawn Andrea!Loved it-kashinath
Foster Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 5:59 PM
To add to my comments below I would like to say. Apart from the beautiful words used in this poem the form appears faultless. A perfect flowing rhyme scheme and a smooth change for the sestet. No wonder it was chosen as a winner, again congratulations....luv Margaret
Frew Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 8:14 PM
great write,good choice!thanx!
Mills Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 3:17 PM
How unique and lovely a poem for a beautiful creature. I'll never think of moths in quite the same way ever again. You have illuminated the cecropia. -Susan Mills
White Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Yes, that is a grand picture you have painted- priceless - and yes I wrote it watching Mr Ed, when he was picking horses to win races!
Anderson Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 10:27 PM
Hey, Andrea thx for leaving comments on my piece....I've asked Audrey to post this comment for me. ....Jimmy
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March 21, 2010 at 6:50 PM
What a beautiful imagery you have captured in this wonderful Poem my friend. Brilliant and outstanding. A lovely splash of beauty from your pen.Thanks and many thanks for your beautiful and precious comments on Vasava-An Untold story 8. Hope you would like 9&10 also. Best wishes and love ........xxxxx Ravindra ...xxx. Andrea Dietrich
Chachere Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 3:13 PM
that so pretty(: i never really liked moths, but the Cecropia sounds wonderful. by the way, im taking your advice and writting more forms of poetry. i posted a limerick. -Always&Forever Lynette
Beam Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 11:19 AM
thanks and congrats to you too thanks for sharing
Austin Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 3:43 AM
I remember the moth with eyes in its wings...don't remember its name. And yes, the poems in my chap book are all from my childhood. I had a wonderful childhood. I feel fortunate. BIG LOVE, daver
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March 19, 2010 at 8:31 PM
U have to post very long poems in two parts.. that is the only way it will work.. another lovely sonnet full of beautiful imagery.. wish I could write like this .. engaging words.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Foster Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 6:14 PM
So much imagery is captured in this lovely sonnet. How could one imprison such a free spirit. A Beautiful write Andrea...love Margaret
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March 19, 2010 at 10:38 AM
Love the gentle nature of this write Andrea, too many times we fail to stop and see the bigger picture going on in nature... Well done, and thanks for your ever welcome comments! Anna-Marie.
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Andrea. Love, Carol
Meade Stephenson Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Andrea this is a wonderful write! Can see in my mind the scene you have painted with words. The last line is so poignant! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes! Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary~
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March 19, 2010 at 9:02 AM
that last line touched me. i,ve let nets alone long ago. john
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March 19, 2010 at 3:31 AM
Good morning, Andrea. Beautiful sentiments, insights, and poetry have slipped from your hand to our hearts in this one. What more wonderful way to feel the joy of life is there than to witness life in action...and let it go on as intended. Excellent poetry. Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 19, 2010 at 2:10 AM
Very nice write, Andrea. Beautiful imagery indeed and your wording is perfect. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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