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Cecropia, transported through the night on satin wings lined white in their design, hovers over innocence by moon’s shine. A fragrant bloom has stopped him in his flight, and on a petal he prepares to light. He ceases fluttering so as to dine on that sweet nectar of his valentine. And I alone am witness to this sight. The moth and orchid's union gladdens me as wayside, I am frozen where I stand, for what I've found, though simple it may be, has purpose and is nothing short of grand. Now captured by the beauty that I see, I let my net slip gently from my hand. For Brian Strand's "Any Poem of 2011" Contest

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Date: 4/22/2013 7:22:00 PM
Had to google the very first word but am now a less ignorant man than I was. And I've read another beautiful sonnet. You really have a feel for these. - Red
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:37:00 AM
A great sonnet for a great win......George
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 5:09:00 AM
This was a wonderful read. You deserve this win very much!! I particularly like this:A fragrant bloom has stopped him in his flight, and on a petal he prepares to light... Very catchy. Love it, Sami
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Date: 2/27/2011 5:01:00 PM
I knew this incredible sonnet would win first place dear Andrea. Many congrat's girlfriend. Lainie
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 2/27/2011 9:11:00 AM
oh yikes-- I read my comments below-- what in the world did I say there?? "sonnet is definitely your sonnet"??? haha sorry I meant "forte"! and I am so happy that you won with this amazing beauty, I'd be floored if you didn't take top prize for this form! Super congrats, sweetie :) hugs to you :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 6:18:00 AM
CONGRATS, Andrea! Peace always, John
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Date: 2/27/2011 5:55:00 AM
Andrea, awesome and touching. what a great sonnet. There is however one problem with it if you don't mind my saying so and that is... I didn't write it! it's is just beautiful. congratulations
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:48:00 PM
Well, so far Mr. Heck has picked all the perfect poems for his contest. I never wrote a Sonnet and this one is outstanding. If I ever have to write a Sonnet in the future you're going to be my mentor. With your permission, of course. Beautiful. Congrats on your #1 WIN in Mr. Heck's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:28:00 PM
bagging firts, andrea.. my happy cheers to you for the fine win :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:07:00 PM
Awesome job , good to see you with a top spot, Andrea. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 5:05:00 PM
excellent Queen of Meter..wonderful to see you get the acclaim you deserve. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 2:19:00 PM
Your outstanding Forte....is always amazing!! Well done, and congrats, Andrea!!
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Date: 2/26/2011 2:12:00 PM
Hey Queen of Sonnets ,congrats on your 1st place win !---kash
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Date: 2/26/2011 12:55:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your terrific win in John's contest for first place my friend.. amazing as always .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:56:00 AM
Sonnet is DEFINITELY your sonnet, sweetie, I would be surprised if you entered something else ;) this is another beauty that showcases your amazing talent with the form :) this has to be a winner! really love that last line & I tried reading this aloud-- I don't think I can even come close to getting meter like what you do here--- hugs to you :)
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:08:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful, Andrea. Love the last line. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:31:00 PM
Smile ~ and also for myself once more, "Your Beauties," final few verses; especially the last two were as the icing upon the perfect cake so to speak within, "Absolute Beauty!!!" ~ i would also have to say that this truth most definitely does apply unto, "Your 'Majestic' Self My Dear; 'Intoxicatingly Mesmerizing!!!'" ~ a fave atop the cherished mantel of beautiful faves ~ love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:09:00 PM
Smile ~ i read this very sweet and beautiful painting yesterday and thought how extremely soft and lovely it felt "My Dear, 'Precious & Beautiful Andrea Dietrich.'" ~ so i thought that i would rewind the moments journey amid its enchanting colours once more and, Yes, it is still magical and gently Soul stirring i guess one might say; at least it feels this way unto my own humbled self, dear gifted lady ~ Cont:)
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:24:00 AM
thankxx Andrea for your many complimentary words on my example poem.. all true story details too... been thinking about a name contest for a while... so with so many diversified names on site .. think many exciting entries will emerge... good luck hoping u will definitely enter a rare beauty luv..
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Date: 2/16/2011 12:53:00 PM
Very well written. I think John will like this for his contest.
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Date: 2/16/2011 11:59:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea. I think you "captured" a place in the winners' circle with this entry. Best wishes in John's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2011 10:19:00 AM
Another gem from your favorite form. Just great! Love, Dave
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