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Candle Starlet

playful and flirtatious flame twinkling and glimmering candle dancing flickering casting a myriad of midnight shadows scintillating and wavering mesmerizing and hypnotizing fluttering and quivering in the dead stillness of dark night hours suddenly yikes! it dawns on me that your flame may really be a captive struggling with despair to free itself to join its brethren stars up in the sky AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 6, 2018

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Date: 3/6/2018 3:58:00 PM
I have always been attracted by candle flames, Line, and this lovely, lively poem confirms why a candle flame can be so captivating. I never looked at the 'Struggling with despair to free' aspect of it, though I have pitied it's end when the candle finishes. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/6/2018 5:49:00 PM
LOL - we both have too much time on our hands. Thanks for your cheerful visit and message, Paul.
Date: 3/6/2018 1:12:00 PM
Too much thinkin and not enough drinkin, well done Line...
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Date: 3/6/2018 1:41:00 PM
Dear Charlie, you are a wealth of wisdom. I just have to start drinking more. What would I do without you!! LOL
Date: 3/6/2018 12:48:00 PM
LOVE IT!!! Thanks...great job! Speaks to me as we enjoy candles and the 'dance' of the flame at our house!
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Date: 3/6/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Michael. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/6/2018 10:16:00 AM
I really like the paragraph structure on this one. it's always those 'little' distractions....
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Date: 3/6/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Kurt. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/6/2018 8:43:00 AM
An interesting perspective.
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Date: 3/6/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and for leaving a note, Richard.

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