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Canadian Autumn

Canadian Autumn

Forests of old and new growth in constant turmoil
Are held upright by root systems filtering the soil.
Trees and saplings stretch upward in the wilderness
To absorb the sun’s rays for photosynthesis.

Stands of coniferous and deciduous trees
(Bearing green needles, and red, yellow, and orange leaves)
Bent by capricious winds, resiliently snap back straight,
And march down slopes to the edges of northern lakes.

Claiming the ground on which to propagate and grow
While roiling, whitecaps splash against the rock-stacked shores.
Where driftwood beach and animals forage for food,
Under the canopy of trees spreading out their boughs.

As temperatures drop, snowflakes fall and unite
To blanket the forests while the lakes start forming ice.
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Bowring Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 9:12 AM
This is such a delightful, visually vibrant poem Dennis. I’ve always wanted to visit beautiful Canada and your poem makes me yearn more to see it! So many gorgeous lines,’ And march down slopes to the edges of northern lakes’ ‘ under the canopy of trees spreading out their boughs’. I love the ending couplet- so wonderfully described. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
Spilchuk Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 3:47 PM
I share your views. Spoken like a naturalist. If only people knew how precious it is. Beauty beyond borders. Thank you for commenting.
Baker Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Wonderful descriptions and imagery, Dennis. Canada is a beautiful country. Thanks for sharing the Autumn beauty with us through your poetry, my friend. Bill
Spilchuk Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment, Bill.
Jones Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Your work combines imagery and informative phrases that educate and enlighten. You take poetry to a new level yet with skill deliver so as to reach us all no matter where we are learned or not. Bravo. Thanks for visiting my page.
Spilchuk Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Your comment is flattering and generous. I thank you for it.
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