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Canadian Autumn Forests of old and new growth in constant turmoil Are held upright by root systems filtering the soil. Trees and saplings stretch upward in the wilderness To absorb the sun’s rays for photosynthesis. Stands of coniferous and deciduous trees, (Bearing green needles and red and yellow leaves) Bent by capricious winds, resiliently snap back straight, And march down slopes to the edges of northern lakes. Claiming the ground on which to propagate and grow While roiling, whitecaps splash against the rock-stacked shores. Where driftwood beach and animals forage for food, Under the canopy of trees spreading out their boughs. As temperatures drop, snowflakes fall and unite To blanket the forests while the lakes form ice.

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Date: 10/2/2023 9:12:00 AM
This is such a delightful, visually vibrant poem Dennis. I’ve always wanted to visit beautiful Canada and your poem makes me yearn more to see it! So many gorgeous lines,’ And march down slopes to the edges of northern lakes’ ‘ under the canopy of trees spreading out their boughs’. I love the ending couplet- so wonderfully described. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 10/2/2023 3:47:00 PM
I share your views. Spoken like a naturalist. If only people knew how precious it is. Beauty beyond borders. Thank you for commenting.
Date: 9/28/2023 4:26:00 PM
Wonderful descriptions and imagery, Dennis. Canada is a beautiful country. Thanks for sharing the Autumn beauty with us through your poetry, my friend. Bill
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 9/30/2023 10:21:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment, Bill.
Date: 9/24/2023 9:55:00 AM
Your work combines imagery and informative phrases that educate and enlighten. You take poetry to a new level yet with skill deliver so as to reach us all no matter where we are learned or not. Bravo. Thanks for visiting my page.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 9/30/2023 10:22:00 AM
Your comment is flattering and generous. I thank you for it.

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