Can I Let Go

Can I Let Go? I'm in awe of the essence of you, sweetheart you're my early sunrise You fill my days and nights with so much passion, I delight in you each chance I get. I never tire of you. Our love is like a gentle tidal wave that washes over my soul continuously. What we have is no mere fairy tale, it's much better than that, much better. Relax, and let me lose myself in you. Let's write a best-selling love story. Baby do you hear that? That's your heart beating in my chest, you own it. I never knew that one could make sweet love without even touching. You've shown me that and so much more. Can I let go baby? I want to fall into you. So can I let go baby?

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2018 7:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win Alexis Regards Tom

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2018 11:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Alexis, great romantic write for the contest! Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2018 3:18:00 AM

- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Alexis :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 2/12/2018 11:49:00 PM

Congratulations, Alexis on your fine win.

Silent One

Date: 2/12/2018 5:21:00 PM

Some romantic lines Alexis.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/10/2017 11:12:00 AM

Beautiful love poem, Alexis. The words of passion are powerful ... I never knew that one could make sweet love w/o touching ... such a romantically surreal expression of love. Who wouldn't want to let go and fall into that big heart of yours. A sure 10 on the RW love scale! Love and hugs to you, dear.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2016 11:47:00 AM

From life experience, I know well that one can fall in love "without even touching." I think this is the purest form of love as it makes no demands. Taken to the next step, a totally different relationship is created. From this lovely poem, I can tell it's time to "let go" and explore all possibilities, Alexis. Well done!

Sonya Stewart

Date: 10/25/2016 9:57:00 AM

I love this ...wish I was in this moment of love ...excellent writing .

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/25/2016 10:10:00 AM

Hi Sonia, Thank you so much. I love writing stories about love and romance. I'm glad you enjoyed it. PS, When you get a chance read my poems" Redemption and Forbidden Love:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/24/2016 9:40:00 PM

Aside form good poetry, I can really feel each line, if only ones like you really existed! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/24/2016 4:00:00 PM

You do write beautiful poetry, Alexis...Sincere and sweet. :) This is a beautiful testament to a love that doesn't know the confines of time and space. Hugs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 10/24/2016 9:41:00 PM

I smiled when I read Eileens comment, if the princess of romance likes a poem, well it just has to be good! :) You both have so much style!

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/24/2016 5:14:00 PM

Hi Eileen, Thank you so much. That means a lot coming from you. I appreciate that you stopped by:)Alexis

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/24/2016 6:54:00 AM

I really like this one. Sounds like a strong enchanting love. This is a fav for me.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/24/2016 6:27:00 AM

I understand and have lived your words, Alexis. The want and need for someone, and yet knowing you'd be better off by letting go. How difficult are life's choices and the repercussions after we've made them. I hope you're well and happy.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/24/2016 7:16:00 AM

Hi Lin, It's nice to see you. In the instance when I referred to letting go, I was saying letting go to fall into the man that holds my heart. I could never let go of such a love. I appreciate that you stopped by today:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2016 6:21:00 AM

oh so romantic Alexis - the type of love we all dream of:-) hugs Jan xx

Paloma P

Date: 10/24/2016 3:31:00 AM

'best-selling love story' of 'a gentle tidal wave', why would you ever let go? I fell into your poem and I liked it. :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/24/2016 7:05:00 AM

Hi Paloma, Can I let go? Is saying, letting go to fall into you(the man who holds my heart) I could never let of a love it this. Thank's for visiting me today:')Alexis

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/23/2016 10:07:00 PM

Very romantic poem. Especially the line "your heart beating in my chest" is fabulous. My best regards, Alexis.

White Wolf

Date: 10/23/2016 9:49:00 PM

What would this world be without romance. Beautiful Alexis /|\

Sofia Ra

Date: 10/23/2016 9:14:00 PM

Beautiful poem. Extremely captivating. That's the kind of love we all want.Love this in so many ways!