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Can I Be: The lyrics in your song? the words of your poem? the paint on your canvas? the script for your movie? the groove in your dance? the ink in your pen? the twinkle in your eye? the beat of your heart? the "star"of your dreams your every desire? your early sunrise? your place of comfort? And most of all Can I always be the love of your life? 11-4-16 Alexis Y

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Date: 1/7/2017 9:22:00 AM
This poem is so nice, I just had to read it twice, Alexis. That's what putting poems in the fave is all about, right. Very luxuriating read. This poem is like velvet fingers brushing the soul. Loved it even better the second time around. Love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 11/5/2016 5:55:00 AM
I can see that you are already the scenery afar! Best wishes!
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Date: 11/4/2016 4:33:00 PM
I hope he said yes Alexis this is so so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2016 2:36:00 PM
I'm enthralled by this beautifully romantic poem, Alexis. Who could refuse that offer from you. A gorgeous poem, my dear. Love always. RW
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Date: 11/4/2016 12:02:00 PM
Im sure you can.
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Date: 11/4/2016 10:23:00 AM
Who could ever refuse such an offer dear, Alexis? A seven!
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Date: 11/4/2016 9:40:00 AM
This made me smile. If the last line receives a yes, then all of the other lines are good to go as well. Really fun Alexis.
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Date: 11/4/2016 9:28:00 AM
How adorably sweet Alexis.
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