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Can Forgiveness Be Found

____ She wandered in gracious steps twirling and leaping in dance she wept Upon the emerald grass flowing in her beauty her love within my heart silently kept For,within each sunset I stand alone with auburn hills fading and gray tones stealing the pink dust Her song,silenced without breath nor reason in darkness, her heart, immersed without trust ____

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon
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Date: 3/7/2012 12:34:00 PM
Very romantically said. Congratulations on your win Rick
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:24:00 AM
Rick...;-) CONGRATULATIONS... NICE WORK IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... ALWAYS~PD
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:36:00 AM
Powerful ending Rick, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest :) blessings Wilma
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Date: 3/7/2012 8:12:00 AM
congrats Rick on a wonderful write and win for Brian's contest.. intense lines luv..
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:39:00 AM
Good Morning and Congratulations on your win in Brian's "One To Fifteen" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:16:00 AM
Powerful write here fav line [gray tones stealing the pink dust] Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:07:00 PM
Rick, HI! hi! hi!... i hate forgiving people... sorry..you got me on a bad subject...I'm gonna be honest... lately all I do is forgive.. IS something wrong with me... yes..and trust what a hard issue..I can't even trust the word trust... sorry for this rampage comment... Love your poem..thank you always..pd
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