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What is it about this figure that stands between us? Do we allow it to stand there Forever? I want to be there with you. In 5 months what will we know? Will we know more or less? It matters. I see us spread out on paper, Like ink blotches, forming,and coming together. Thrashing about like Hollywood lovers. It's a fantasy. It is as if it was produced to seem Like we can never reach desire. And the direction is scattered, unclear. Our dreams understand more, It focuses on exactly what we want. They show me a stage of actors, And you are what I want, we both feel it. I search for you, And there you are.

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Date: 9/1/2020 2:14:00 AM
I liked the logic of your words. Life can feel we are just actors. Rarely do we see real face. I enjoyed the poem. You made the reader ponder the place we can be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:03:00 PM
Silent Sarah, very deep, I am lovin this 7 ~
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:18:00 PM
Interesting poem and poetic name... Awesome write. LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 1:28:00 PM
NICE WRITE. SK
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Date: 8/29/2014 12:01:00 AM
nicely written! =) I saw the whole thing great use of imagery! - edward
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:50:00 PM
As the Bard said, all the world's a stage; we stand in the limelight looking for love. Somehow it seems to always appear from the darkest corners of the theatre. Thank you for shedding the light !
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:19:00 PM
I enjoyed every word written here. Love the word play in the third stanza.
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Date: 4/24/2014 3:38:00 PM
This is a very emotional and greatly written poem :) you should read my poems from my old Profile look up Lexi Matheny .. I like your style and the rhythm your poems have.. Amazing write Sarah!
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Date: 2/28/2014 3:46:00 PM
very effective poem ,my dear.. :') i enjoyed your poem a lot!!!! ...it speaks a lot! ..oxox
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