Calm Lake

The lake is all calm Reflections are clear and still A familiar scene Returns with a memory Of everything we once shared Heidi Sands 8/13/17

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Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2017 4:10:00 AM

This is a very sentimental write my friend! I don't necessarily view this as a sad poem however! Memories can be very wonderful and pleasant, and happy! What a lovely piece this one truly is, Great Work Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 7:57:00 AM

That is true Russell. Thank you for your feedback on this :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/13/2017 12:11:00 PM

The lake will calm the not so pleasant memories!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 12:24:00 PM

Yes that's right Vijay! It does and will do that :) Thank you :)