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Look at what's happening today, hate's openly put on display. It seems like folks changed overnight, and lately, life just doesn't feel right. A smidgen of truth, spiced with lies, fake news makes my blood pressure rise. And I'm more frightened every day, for I fear war is on its way. When I'm feeling overly stressed, my heart starts to pound in my chest. And as fear and dread alternate, I start to hyperventilate. My pulse quickens; I gasp for air, and danger signs are everywhere. I take a moment to calm down, pause life and turn myself around. I close my eyes, meld with the dark, and picture a walk in the park. Switching off reality's light, I allow thought to be my sight. And with my mind back in control, it works to calm a panicked soul. And listening to songs of whales, my pulse slows down as calm prevails. (Couplet) 01/14/2022 C Form - Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France How Many Syllables

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Date: 2/15/2022 7:24:00 PM
A beautiful poem reflecting emotions of many of us right now - I loved it and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/16/2022 9:36:00 AM
Thanks, Betty, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/31/2022 9:53:00 AM
The world has become a scary place and I'm glad you've been able to find calm. I find listening to music from my past calms me :) Your poem is beautifully written--describes life today perfectly. Congratulations on First Place win!
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Date: 1/31/2022 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Ann, we find ourselves living in trying times my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/31/2022 6:04:00 AM
"with my mind back in control, it works to calm a panicked soul" - great. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/31/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate all of your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/30/2022 2:33:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your First Place win in my C Forms - Couplet contest with your wonderful poem, sometimes reality is just too much handle and we need to calm our soul and heart ~ Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/31/2022 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/15/2022 6:45:00 AM
another profound and beautiful piece of poetry from you, Emile. "listening to songs of whales," - that's an excellent strategy to calm our mind! So true -music soothes in a way nothing else can. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 1/15/2022 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Malabika, I appreciate your insightful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/14/2022 12:50:00 PM
Beautifully composed and written, Emile. Wishing you much success in Constance's contest. Stay calm, my friend!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/14/2022 3:13:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate all of your comments my friend, Emile.

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