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Call of Dawn

The weightless float of morn throttles like a softly-bathed woman: white, tangy and bubbling with a sprig of mint and dew; petals’ chests opening a gate of chastity, undressed. A path of upturned twigs rips free and slides along veils of bridal mist; misty in a way leaves become pastel strands ; where footprints of grasses become delicate as it is daring , calling forth my name,Eos...Eos. Brocades of lace robe my wind—a breaking moment for these flushed arms to sprinkle the pour of studded foliage cradling morning's wake...soon,new lovers play the choral flute bearing freshly-wed fruits: the smell of earthy breeze drifts upon my mantle of humid, winged caves. Gently daylight wakes, as I, Goddess of light and dawn opens the first rose shimmering ' neath my tapestry weightlessly white, no one dares to speak. Who Are You Contest

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Date: 1/7/2014 1:20:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations... xox..PD
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Date: 10/9/2013 11:42:00 AM
Nette, , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~SKAT
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Date: 10/4/2013 6:47:00 PM
Excellent, Nette. Great write. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:50:00 PM
NETTE, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:18:00 PM
NETTE... NICE WIN..... CONGRATUALTIONS! ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 3:06:00 PM
Nette, This is so good. You have a lot of images going on here and the way you put them together.......Awesome. Well written and well thought out. Very nice. Congrats on placing on Catie's winners' list...........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:59:00 AM
You know, usually I don't like poems on this subject, but this one seems ancient, pure, and beautiful.
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:29:00 AM
congrats Nette luv on an outstanding win for this ultra special creative poem my sweet friend.. u nailed it with finesse..luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Catie's~ "Free Verse" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:14:00 AM
full of Pan! charming win! I'm still vibrating with it! Light & Love
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Date: 2/19/2012 1:04:00 AM
Wonderful imagination of Dawn, weightlessly white where no one dares to speak, lovely penned, loved and enjoyed. Best wishes for the contest, bl
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:04:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! I love reading your poetry, Nette. Your words are calming. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/18/2012 5:32:00 PM
things of dream come into view, of humming birds and bees adeiu love it the imagery...
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Date: 2/18/2012 12:38:00 PM
Happy Saturday, Nette. Only have a moment. Love the images you have given us, especially brocades of lace wrap her wind. Just lovely and should do well in the contest! Hugs, Cyndi
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Date: 2/18/2012 11:53:00 AM
I always love to read your poetry Nette, you bring such imagery through very grandiose descriptions! This one is very rich with visions within it! I love your poems that have these descriptions within it! I really enjoyed this write this afternoon my friend! This is a spectacular poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/18/2012 11:53:00 AM
Soup Mail!!
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Date: 2/18/2012 7:53:00 AM
excellence.
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Date: 2/18/2012 3:21:00 AM
I found myself reading this in a "whispered" voice in my mind. It's quite breathtaking !!
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Date: 2/18/2012 3:20:00 AM
Best wishes for the contest.....
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Date: 2/18/2012 3:18:00 AM
Another amazing write from you Nette.Love it.
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Date: 2/18/2012 3:15:00 AM
Hmmm...I am here!!
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