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CALL MY NAME

The whisper of dawn calls my name gliding like a softly-bathed air: tangy and afloat with a spice of mint in christened pools lithely buoyant. A path of upturned twigs rip free to sail along bobs of peppered dew; dewy in a way new sunrise adorns pastel fingers where wings of ray become intricate as it is daring ; calling forth, 'Daughter of Light'..."Light's Daughter" till the fragrance of earth winds huffs upon morn's sweet delicacy , bearing my mythical seal upon gracious earth. 1.16.2017 POTD What's In A Name Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 2/6/2017 9:01:00 PM
The imagery's lovely! Congrats on POTD. :)
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Date: 1/28/2017 4:21:00 AM
Hi Nette. Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/20/2017 2:44:00 AM
Congratulations on first place and also on POTD Nette. A splendid poem! 7 ; )
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Date: 1/20/2017 2:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place!
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:47:00 PM
Some beautiful phrasing, nette. I commend you on composing such a beautiful response to the prompt. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 1/19/2017 5:14:00 PM
Big Congrats nette!!! :) so beautiful... Big Hugggs!!! Love ya!! Deb
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Date: 1/19/2017 4:28:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again, great work Nette...
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Date: 1/19/2017 1:57:00 PM
Hi Nette, It's no suprise you got the top spot. Your poem was the best hands down. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/19/2017 1:50:00 PM
You are inspiring to others in your use of metaphors and imagery. Congratulations on a first place, deserved win.
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Date: 1/19/2017 1:45:00 PM
beautiful Nette! lovely poem for a lovely woman with a lovely name :) -luloo
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Date: 1/19/2017 7:24:00 AM
Your writing skill is praiseworthy, Nette! Always a pleasure to read your work. I should make it appoint to "call your name" whenever my muse fails to turn up! ~ Congrats on p.o.t.d. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/18/2017 7:08:00 PM
Your name is "BEAUTIFUL" nette
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Date: 1/18/2017 8:02:00 AM
- Congratulations, Nette ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2017 7:47:00 PM
One can simply get lost in your stunning imagery dear fri end... Must fave this one.. bol in contest!!
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Date: 1/17/2017 4:41:00 PM
Brimming full of stunning lines, Nette - Simply divine! Beautiful poetry. All my very best...As always, Nette. :) john
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Date: 1/17/2017 4:16:00 PM
Great job! Good luck in the contest and congrats on POTD!! ~Cindi~
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Date: 1/17/2017 11:32:00 AM
Wonderful and amazing write, Nette, congratulations on POTD Hugs
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Date: 1/17/2017 10:43:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW!!! this is amazing. its so detailed. i hope to read more from you!!!
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Date: 1/17/2017 10:27:00 AM
You just let beauty flow from your fingers. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/17/2017 8:22:00 AM
Wonderful entry Nette already with honors, congratulations for garnering POTD recognition...
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Date: 1/17/2017 8:03:00 AM
I second those emotions of the other talented poets/poetesses, Nette. Beautifully expressed and skillfully written. A most opulent poem, full of truth and dignity. Congrats on POTD. Well deserved. Love and joy to you.
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Date: 1/17/2017 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations nette on POTD. Beautifully written!
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Date: 1/17/2017 7:05:00 AM
Hi Nette, What a great take on the contest theme. This piece is so beautiful. It's captivating and mesmerizing as well It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/17/2017 7:03:00 AM
Back to congratulate! Knew this was exceptional. Love, armand.
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:49:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, nette. It was lovely to wake up to your beautiful poem.
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