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Call It In the Air

Call it in the air . I flipped a quarter and called heads, then watched as it hit the ground and rolled through the grate, staring at me from the bottom of the drain like a charm seeking its bracelet, still crying because the clasp broke. Taking a seat on the curb as the sun began setting at the west end of the block, I felt long shadows gathering at my feet, swallowing me in darkness, but still the coin glistened, mocking me. The next morning I was awakened by the sound of your alarm clock through the open window two floors up, when I heard him say “good morning beautiful” and you closed the blinds. Then glancing down into the sewer again I saw a note where the coin had rested in your handwriting that told me something I had already figured out, “It was tails, you lost.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/26/2018 9:01:00 AM
Fresh out of coins? I have a jar you can have, if you need a smile. Such beautiful imagery - " a charm seeking its bracelet, still crying because the clasp broke." Well done
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thanks again, Sure, can I borrow a couple of bucks for a coffee? :) I'm happy you liked this one
Date: 10/25/2018 7:56:00 AM
Wow! Great imagination...has a dreamlike quality.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2018 9:25:00 AM
Or a nightmare. : ) Thanks so much Kim
Date: 10/24/2018 4:31:00 PM
You wrote a cryptic mysterious poem here, I am intrigued. I wish to know more. where does this lead,?
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Date: 10/24/2018 4:48:00 PM
You are right, it is kind of cryptic and even though I know what it means and where it is going, I don't think I did a very good job of expressing my thoughts. Let's just say my luck wasn't good enough and she ended up with someone else.

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