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Call and Response Poetry Depository As and When I Think of More

Walking over to the wrong parked car Remembering it is Monday A bird squawking over the sweet tweeters An extrovert in a meeting of introverts Putting my own booted feet on my own sofa The easy comfort of habitual self sabotage The sky reflected in a raindrop The possibility of change An open poetry book Glance into the soul A faraway dog barking Interrupted thoughts Brown camila Dropping your dinner on the floor The dog wanting to go out with expectant face Wishing a shooting star and the wish coming true

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/27/2023 1:18:00 AM

Wonderful, would appreciate if you let me know what you think of mine, DD:)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/27/2023 1:36:00 AM

Yours are more poetic than mine Jo. I'm intrigued by the matching of gut reaction, sensory experience, particularly with unpoetic images but when matched with another image gain something intangible that imitates poetry (or something like that!)

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/26/2023 11:50:00 PM

really excellent, great imagery indeed, thanks yann

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/26/2023 11:53:00 PM

Thanks Yann, it seems a shame to waste them when they pop into my head!