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Caleb

Caleb The dawn was steel and gray The day Caleb came to his senses, He could smell the kitchen love, Of Maxwell House and blintzes. “It’s been too long – he stretched Since this home was filled with laughter. On his face split a crooked smile, For Caleb’s morning after. The revival meeting ‘neath the canopy “All day singin’ and dinner on the grounds,” Went two noisy whooping days, Dark and light, out of bounds. “Wonder if I’d be presumptious,” Now that it’s done and over, To court Lucy Bell in broad daylight, Neath that flopping canopy cover. The singers are gone home But that’s all right Lucy Bell’s voice is like song to me, With or without white moonlight. “Brush your teeth” came a throated yell, From the sweet smell the kitchen way; It wasn’t a yell from Lucy Bell, “Git up, time to start your day!” Caleb started and shook, realized His Lucy Bell was only a dream, “Git in here, Caleb, grab your knife and fork,” Monday waits for no man, good or mean!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/22/2018 3:52:00 PM
For a second I thought you are talking about Caleb, the country singer that came up second in American Idel... Nicely done...
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Date: 5/10/2018 7:29:00 PM
Oh, Sunlite, I love the twist at the end of your beautiful ballad. The ending is very effective and ingenious. Your poem enthralled me with its content and imagery.. I could smell, (and hear..) the 'love' coming from the kitchen.. too bad the dream had to end.. A fantastic write!
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Date: 5/6/2018 4:19:00 AM
HA HA! Oh dear....one does get caught up in daydreaming. A problem common to all...Loved the ending! Great write.
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