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Calamity At the Castle

The king and the queen in a boat Started lazily out of the moat When the king got aggressive 'Twas very impressive To see that the king didn't float! "

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/15/2015 12:48:00 PM

HaHaHaHaaaaa king didn't float! How can he float? a gloater a bloater. Enjoyed it Deb. Love}}}}}}}} rajat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:34:00 PM

DEB, NICE SEEING YOU ON ANDREA'S WINNING LIST... Congratulations!!! LUV*LINDA

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2014 5:50:00 PM

This is cute, Deb! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/31/2014 3:14:00 AM

congratulations Deb .....Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/30/2014 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2014 6:12:00 AM

It's Sunday and happy to enjoy the fun and humor. Congrats on the win, deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2014 9:47:00 PM

aha, so I HAD seen this one before!! Congrats again in MY contest!! it's got a pretty fine limerick beat.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/20/2013 9:56:00 AM

Cute limerick, Deb! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/19/2013 9:36:00 PM

Congratulations on a wonderful win, Deb! Good to see you..I hope all is well! Enjoy the weekend! Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2013 7:20:00 PM

Hi Deb, love it...a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2013 8:40:00 AM

a good limerick... congrats! ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2013 1:09:00 AM

Congratulations for your win with this clever limerick. I see all us entering under humor were choosing limericks!!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/18/2013 11:53:00 PM

So funny Deb: Really made me chuckle.... Congrats on you win. SuZ

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/18/2013 10:04:00 PM

congrats Deb on your 2nd place win in the "humor" portion of the contest

James Fraser

Date: 8/22/2010 12:33:00 AM

haha, funny one Deb. Maybe all his robes dragged him down >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/16/2010 5:35:00 AM

A beautiful new day, many wonderful new poems to read of which yours is among,the weekend is upon us. What more could I ask for? I hope you have a fantastic weekend filled with love, happiness, and lots of inspiration Deb. Love, Carol