Calamity At the Castle

The king and the queen in a boat
Started lazily out of the moat
When the king got aggressive
'Twas very impressive
To see that the king didn't float!



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chakrabarty Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 12:48 PM
HaHaHaHaaaaa king didn't float! How can he float? a gloater a bloater. Enjoyed it Deb. Love}}}}}}}} rajat
A   Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 10:34 PM
DEB, NICE SEEING YOU ON ANDREA'S WINNING LIST... Congratulations!!! LUV*LINDA
Merryman Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 5:50 PM
This is cute, Deb! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Roberts Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 3:14 AM
congratulations Deb .....Seren
Johnson Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 6:12 AM
It's Sunday and happy to enjoy the fun and humor. Congrats on the win, deb
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 9:47 PM
aha, so I HAD seen this one before!! Congrats again in MY contest!! it's got a pretty fine limerick beat.
Merryman Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Cute limerick, Deb! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Haick Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful win, Deb! Good to see you..I hope all is well! Enjoy the weekend! Love, Annalise
A   Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 7:20 PM
Hi Deb, love it...a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA
A  Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 8:40 AM
a good limerick... congrats! ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 1:09 AM
Congratulations for your win with this clever limerick. I see all us entering under humor were choosing limericks!!
Delaney Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 11:53 PM
So funny Deb: Really made me chuckle.... Congrats on you win. SuZ
Roberts Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:04 PM
congrats Deb on your 2nd place win in the "humor" portion of the contest
Fraser Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 12:33 AM
haha, funny one Deb. Maybe all his robes dragged him down >> James
Brown Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 5:35 AM
A beautiful new day, many wonderful new poems to read of which yours is among,the weekend is upon us. What more could I ask for? I hope you have a fantastic weekend filled with love, happiness, and lots of inspiration Deb. Love, Carol
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