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Cairns Edge

The beach gathers its dead. Thousands of horseshoe crabs
come home on the full moon’s tide. Their courting dances, 
scrawled with claw and carapace in the wet sand, leave
with the ghost hands of nursing Autumn wave.

Their nests of jewel-colored eggs, covered and soothed
seasoned in salt sea, gestate beneath a slurry of debris.
Right side up each skin colored husk with its barbed tail
rocks in the bubbling broth of Cape Cod’s bay.

Belly up, they appear as an open invitation to the plovers
who flock overhead and arrow down en masse to dine.
Piping plovers, masked in black, hopscotch through the
detritus, connoisseurs of this turquois egg-like caviar.

Among the life and death of sea we walk, barefoot, and 
cautious wary of the scramble, the jutting barbs, the bits
of un-soothed glass, the desecrated cairn which barricades
the dying life from the living sea.  


Published First in Sounding Review 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kundu Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 1:18 PM
The way the poem unravels is simply exemplary. A great read!
Fleming Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 7:04 AM
The cycle of life...As it will be for an almost eternal age. My warmest wishes, Debbie...And all the best for your New Year! :) john
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Wow! You have become a master of words. This took me right there to Cape Cod Bay where horseshoe crab eggs lay vulnerable on the sandy shore. You have amazed me.
Roper Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Wow, your art work is breathtaking, Debbie,, I love this one a 7 and a fav. Hugs Eve
George   Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:29 AM
A vibrant picture of the stark reality of life painted in words as only you can do. Splendid writing, dear Deb. Elaine
Wigley Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 12:19 AM
A lovely sense of place, and very atmospheric, Debbie. Enjoyed. Viv x
Ryerson Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 6:09 PM
Beautifully done Cher and congratulations! Your rather brutal yet elegant description of Cape Cod's Bay reminds me just a tad of the chapter in Cannery Row when Doc takes Hazel, one of the 'boys' to collect samples in a cove and his description of the sea life there...How have you been?
DiMino Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Wow! Outstanding write! Amazing use of language making imagery.
Warlov Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 5:04 AM
I'd think rather that the sea buries its dead upon the shore. Is that too romantic?
Guzzi Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Not too romantic for me- a good way to go as well! Light & love
Anish Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Great nature poem here. I 0ahve been a member of the National Wildlife Federation for many years. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
De La Luna Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Vivid description! You brought me to the scene! Love and light to you!
Guzzi Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:03 PM
thanks Hija!
Merryman Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:43 PM
I love this, Debbie! Beautiful descriptive language. It's good to see you here! Blessings! This is just too weird: my captcha letters are my initials - kjm
Guzzi Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Hi Kim I have missed you. How are you & your family?
Chircop Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:08 PM
I could put so many images in my mind just through your words.Congrats.on being published ma..I am so proud of you..Hugs.
Guzzi Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:41 PM
Oh little one how I miss your thoughts- peeking at life through your eyes - how's your sweet baby?
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:15 AM
Absolutely amazing Debbie - I am in awe of your creativity in this vivid descriptive write:-) Many congrats on its publication:-) hugs Jan xx7
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 8:46 AM
thanks for your lovely comment Debbie :-) I will be performing 2 of my poems at our main theatre on 18th November - a charity night in front of about 800 people if it sells out:-) and I will get round to submitting some of my poems in the hope they will be published:-) hugs jan xx
Guzzi Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Jan you have great skill as well you just need to submit, submit, submit, and brush off any naysayers!
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